Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，例如“when it worn out”应为“when they are worn out”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复。

Example: No, I don't like buying shoes often because I am a surgeon. I usually wear Crocs at work and have only two pairs of sneakers: one for walking and one for cycling. Therefore, I only buy new shoes every few years when my current ones are worn out.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“online shopping often offer”应为“online shopping often offers”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，如“because”后面直接跟原因。避免口语化表达“you know”。

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes online because, as a busy surgeon, I don't have much free time to shop in stores. Moreover, online shopping often offers discounts, making it a good bargain.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“spend the month between 1000 to 2000”不明确，建议改为“spend between $1000 and $2000 per year”。注意单复数一致，“shoes”前不加冠词“a”。建议提供更具体的细节和逻辑连接词。

Example: I usually spend between $1000 and $2000 per year on shoes because sneaker prices have been rising recently. If you want well-designed, durable, and comfortable shoes, the price is usually no less than $800.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和口语化词汇，如“wow”不适合正式回答。句子结构不完整，应使用连词使句子通顺，如“because I need to walk about 10,000 steps every day, comfortable shoes make my feet feel better.”

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk about 10,000 steps every day, and comfortable shoes help my feet feel better.

× I wear Crocs in at my workplace from time to time.

✓ I wear Crocs at my workplace from time to time.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect when used together with 'at' in this context. The correct preposition to indicate location is 'at'.

× I only need two other sneakers, one for walk and the other for cycling.

✓ I only need two other sneakers, one for walking and the other for cycling.

The noun 'walk' should be in the gerund form 'walking' to correctly function as the object of the preposition 'for'.

× So I only need to buy the shoes every few years when it worn out.

✓ So I only need to buy the shoes every few years when they are worn out.

The phrase 'it worn out' is incorrect. 'Worn' is the past participle and needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice. Also, 'shoes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they'.

× Yes, I'd like to buy shoes online because you know, surgeons are very busy.

✓ Yes, I like to buy shoes online because you know, surgeons are very busy.

The use of 'I'd like to' implies a hypothetical or future desire, but the context suggests a habitual action, so simple present 'I like to' is more appropriate.

× And for another reason is online shopping often offer some discounts and it's really a bargain.

✓ And another reason is online shopping often offers some discounts and it's really a bargain.

The verb 'offer' must agree with the singular subject 'online shopping', so it should be 'offers'. Also, 'for another reason' should be 'another reason' to be grammatically correct.

× I always spend the month between 1000 to 2000 because you know for these years the sneakers price is going up.

✓ I always spend between 1000 and 2000 per month because you know, in recent years the price of sneakers has been going up.

The phrase 'spend the month between' is incorrect; it should be 'spend between ... per month'. Also, 'sneakers price' should be 'price of sneakers'. The time expression 'for these years' is better expressed as 'in recent years'.

× If you want to get a well designed, durable and comfortable shoes that the price will no less than $800.

✓ If you want to get well-designed, durable, and comfortable shoes, the price will be no less than $800.

The adjective phrase 'well designed' should be hyphenated as 'well-designed'. The verb 'will' needs 'be' to form 'will be'. Also, the relative pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here and should be removed.

× I would prefer the comfortable shoes because I need to walk about wow 10,000 steps every day in the comfortable shoes can make my fit feels better.

✓ I would prefer comfortable shoes because I need to walk about 10,000 steps every day, and comfortable shoes can make my feet feel better.

The article 'the' before 'comfortable shoes' is unnecessary when speaking generally. The word 'wow' is an interjection and should be removed. 'Fit' should be 'feet', and 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the plural subject 'feet'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses connected by 'and'.