Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I like collecting different types like heels and platforms. I usually buy about three to five pairs each year, mostly every month or so.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response clearly by stating your habit, reasons, and feelings using linking words to make it coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient. Thanks to social media, I can easily browse and shop while relaxing on my sofa, which makes online shopping my favourite activity.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has some irrelevant or unclear parts. Focus on directly answering the question with specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the brand. For instance, last month I spent €200 on a pair of branded shoes, which are my favourite because they are very comfortable for running and playing.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using better linking words. Try to make your response more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes for activities like running or playing, but for parties, I usually choose stylish heels. Overall, my choice depends on the occasion, though comfort is my priority most of the time.

× I do like buying shoes as I am very fond of collecting different variety of heels and platforms and how often I realize most of the month, every month.

✓ I do like buying shoes as I am very fond of collecting different varieties of heels and platforms and I realize I do so most of the month, every month.

The word 'variety' should be pluralized to 'varieties' because it refers to multiple types of heels and platforms. Also, the phrase 'how often I realize' is awkward; it is corrected to 'I realize I do so' to clarify the meaning.

× Yes, most of the time I can do online shopping and it is becoming my habit nowadays as because of social media and it we feel comfortable while lying on the sofa and just for do shopping and I think for this is my favorite thing to do all the time.

✓ Yes, most of the time I do online shopping and it is becoming my habit nowadays because of social media; we feel comfortable lying on the sofa and just doing shopping, and I think this is my favorite thing to do all the time.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used; 'do' is appropriate here for habitual action. The phrase 'as because of' is redundant; 'because of' suffices. 'Just for do shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'just doing shopping'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct present tense usage.

× For example, just last month I spent €200 in some branded shoes and this is my favorite shoes.

✓ For example, just last month I spent €200 on some branded shoes and these are my favorite shoes.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on' is used with spending money. 'This is my favorite shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'these are my favorite shoes'.

× No onwards. It's very comfortable while running or playing.

✓ From now onwards, they are very comfortable while running or playing.

'No onwards' is incorrect and unclear; 'From now onwards' is the correct phrase. 'It's' refers to singular, but 'shoes' is plural, so 'they are' is correct.

× If I am going for running or playing I prefer comfortable shoes and if I am going for a party I mostly prefer some stylish heels shoe.

✓ If I am going running or playing, I prefer comfortable shoes, and if I am going to a party, I mostly prefer some stylish heeled shoes.

The phrase 'going for running or playing' is incorrect; 'going running or playing' is correct. 'Heels shoe' is incorrect; 'heeled shoes' or 'heels' is appropriate. Also, 'going for a party' should be 'going to a party'.