Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'I rare to use shoes' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih efektif dan alami.

Example: No, I don't really enjoy buying shoes. I usually only buy them when I need specific ones, like for hiking or running. I rarely wear shoes in my daily life.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas.

Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm not sure about the correct size. When I purchase online, the shoes might not fit properly, which can be problematic.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan angka yang realistis. Hindari kalimat yang membingungkan dan tidak jelas.

Example: It depends on the brand. I prefer European brands like Last 45 or Black Diamond because they are durable. Usually, I spend around $200 on a pair of shoes.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

Example: Both are nice, but I prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel like I'm not wearing any shoes, which helps me relax.

× I usually buy shoes when I really need it like for hiking or for running.

✓ I usually buy shoes when I really need them, like for hiking or running.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'shoes' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun 'shoes'.

× In my daily I rare to use shoes.

✓ In my daily life, I rarely use shoes.

The phrase 'In my daily' is incomplete; it should be 'In my daily life'. Also, 'rare' is an adjective, but the adverb 'rarely' is needed to modify the verb 'use'.

× No, I never bought shoes online because I don't know the correct size.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I don't know the correct size.

The present perfect tense 'have never bought' is appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now, rather than simple past 'never bought'.

× When I purchase it by online, the goods will come in different size and it will be a problem.

✓ When I purchase it online, the goods come in different sizes and it becomes a problem.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect before 'online'; 'purchase online' is correct. Also, 'different size' should be plural 'different sizes' to match the plural noun 'goods'. The tense is adjusted for clarity.

× the goods will come in different size

✓ the goods will come in different sizes

The noun 'size' should be plural 'sizes' because 'goods' is plural and can have multiple sizes.

× I prefer brands from Europe like last 45 or black diamond and it will purchase a lot but it will lasting so I will purchase around $2,000,000.

✓ I prefer brands from Europe like La Sportiva or Black Diamond, and I purchase a lot because they last long, so I will spend around $2,000,000.

The brand names are corrected for accuracy. 'It will purchase a lot' is incorrect; the subject 'I' should perform the action 'purchase'. 'It will lasting' is incorrect; 'they last long' is correct to describe durability. Also, 'purchase around $2,000,000' is changed to 'spend around $2,000,000' for clarity.

× Both are nice, but I prefer to do comfortable shoes because it can make you feel like you don't use don't wear shoes and it will relax you.

✓ Both are nice, but I prefer comfortable shoes because they can make you feel like you are not wearing shoes and they will relax you.

'Prefer to do comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'prefer comfortable shoes' is correct. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'shoes' (plural). The phrase 'you don't use don't wear shoes' is incorrect and redundant; corrected to 'you are not wearing shoes' for clarity.