Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant information about suits, which is not related to shoes. Try to answer directly and clearly about your shoe buying habits, and avoid mixing topics. Also, use correct prepositions and plural forms, for example, 'in my wardrobe' and 'shoes' instead of 'suits'.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often. I enjoy collecting different styles from various brands to match my outfits.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and a bit confusing due to repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to be concise and clear, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, use 'because' once and explain your reasons clearly.

Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because I find physical stores more trustworthy. Also, I can choose shoes that suit my preferences better in person, and I worry about online scams.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and lacks clarity. Specify the currency and be more direct in answering the question. Also, connect your ideas smoothly using linking words.

Example: I usually spend around 5000 Nepalese Rupees on shoes because I prefer quality over quantity for daily use.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, complete your sentences clearly.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they last longer and are better for work. Comfort is more important to me than style.

× Yes, I like collecting shoes on my wardrobe.

✓ Yes, I like collecting shoes in my wardrobe.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here. We use 'in' to indicate something is inside a container or enclosed space like a wardrobe. So, 'in my wardrobe' is correct.

× I'm very fond of collecting suits from different brands as well.

✓ I'm very fond of collecting shoes from different brands as well.

The sentence context is about shoes, but 'suits' is mentioned incorrectly. It should be 'shoes' to maintain coherence. Also, 'from different brands' is correct preposition usage here.

× No, I prefer buying things from physical stores because it is more trustful and I can choose on my interest rather than in online because there are increasing way of fraud in fraud and scam in online so I prefer having physical.

✓ No, I prefer buying things from physical stores because it is more trustworthy and I can choose according to my interest rather than online because there are increasing cases of fraud and scams online, so I prefer having physical stores.

Several preposition errors: 'choose on my interest' should be 'choose according to my interest'; 'rather than in online' should be 'rather than online'; 'in fraud and scam in online' is incorrect, should be 'cases of fraud and scams online'. Also, 'trustful' is not commonly used; 'trustworthy' is better.

× Nowadays price of shoes is very high around 5000.

✓ Nowadays, the price of shoes is very high, around 5000.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'price'. Also, a comma after 'Nowadays' improves clarity. 'Around 5000' is acceptable but could be clearer with a currency unit.

× I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes because shoes last longer and for doing something work we need comfortable rather than fashionable.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes because comfortable shoes last longer and for doing some work we need comfort rather than fashion.

The phrase 'for doing something work' is incorrect; it should be 'for doing some work'. Also, 'we need comfortable rather than fashionable' is awkward; it should be 'we need comfort rather than fashion' or 'we need comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones'.

× We can be comfortable at any.

✓ We can be comfortable anywhere.

The phrase 'at any' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'anywhere' to indicate any place.