Shoes— Part 1 Report

× Yes, I definitely buy English, like buying shoes every six months.

✓ Yes, I definitely like buying shoes every six months.

The phrase 'buy English' is incorrect and unclear. The student likely meant to say 'I definitely like buying shoes every six months.' The word 'English' is misplaced and unnecessary here.

× As I'm a sports person.

✓ I am a sports person.

The sentence 'As I'm a sports person.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be combined with another sentence or rephrased to be complete.

× I love to change my shoes every six month.

✓ I love to change my shoes every six months.

The word 'month' should be plural 'months' because it refers to a recurring period of six months.

× Yes, I prefer buying shoes online websites as there are many discounts going on and I I like to see the results.

✓ Yes, I prefer buying shoes from online websites as there are many discounts going on and I like to see the results.

The preposition 'from' is needed after 'buying shoes' to indicate the source, i.e., 'from online websites.' Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error.

× I usually spend 1000 or ₹2000 for a shoes.

✓ I usually spend 1000 or ₹2000 for shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a.' Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.

× It it should be a very convenient and comfortable to me to wear a shoes.

✓ They should be very convenient and comfortable for me to wear.

The sentence has repeated 'It it' and uses 'a shoes' which is incorrect. 'Shoes' is plural and should not have 'a.' Also, 'convenient and comfortable' describe 'shoes,' so 'they' is appropriate. 'For me to wear' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I will choose definitely that type of shoes that are very comfortable in wearing.

✓ I will definitely choose that type of shoes that are very comfortable to wear.

The phrase 'comfortable in wearing' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable to wear.' Also, adverb placement is improved by placing 'definitely' before 'choose.'

× I will definitely prefer a fashionable shoes as that will help me to keep activated and it will give a rest to my fits.

✓ I will definitely prefer fashionable shoes as that will help me to stay active and give rest to my feet.

The phrase 'a fashionable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have 'a.' 'Keep activated' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay active.' 'Give a rest to my fits' is incorrect; it should be 'give rest to my feet.'