Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words and clarify your points smoothly. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas better.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes every year because it helps keep my feet comfortable when I run or play sports.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'in a bra' which affects clarity. Try to use correct expressions and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid filler words like 'Ah'.

Example: Yes, I often buy shoes online because I get good discounts and can browse a wide variety of brands from home.

Suggestion: There are repetitions and grammatical errors in your answer. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and be specific.

Example: I usually spend around ₹2000 to ₹3000 on shoes because buying good quality ones helps prevent injuries when I run or play sports.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to compare effectively.

Example: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they make it easier for me to run and go to the gym comfortably.

× I like buying shoes every year as it helps me to keep my feet very comfortable while running or doing a sport. Sports I mean.

✓ I like buying shoes every year as it helps me to keep my feet very comfortable while running or doing sports.

The phrase 'doing a sport' is incorrect because 'sport' is generally uncountable or plural when referring to activities. The correct form is 'doing sports' without the article 'a'. This improves naturalness and grammatical correctness.

× I usually buy shoes online as it gives a good discount and I can see variety of shoes in a bra and every brand being at home.

✓ I usually buy shoes online as it gives a good discount and I can see a variety of shoes from every brand at home.

The phrase 'in a bra' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate the source of variety. Also, 'a variety' requires the article 'a'. This correction clarifies meaning and corrects preposition use.

× I usually spend spend 2 or ₹3000 on the shoes as it is very important to buy a good quality of shoes to avoid injuries during a running or doing any sports.

✓ I usually spend 2 or ₹3000 on shoes as it is very important to buy good quality shoes to avoid injuries during running or doing any sports.

The phrase 'a good quality of shoes' is incorrect; 'quality' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'a running' is incorrect; 'running' is uncountable here. Removing unnecessary articles and pluralizing correctly improves grammar.

× If you you do not buy a good quality it will be difficult for during running.

✓ If you do not buy good quality shoes, it will be difficult to run comfortably.

The original sentence has repetition ('you you'), missing objects, and awkward phrasing. Adding 'shoes' after 'good quality' and rephrasing the latter part clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I will definitely prefer a comfortable shoes over a fashionable shoes as it will help me to do my daily activity easily and comfortably while running and going to gym.

✓ I will definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes as they will help me to do my daily activities easily and comfortably while running and going to the gym.

'A comfortable shoes' and 'a fashionable shoes' are incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. Also, 'daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities' and 'going to gym' requires the article 'the'. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× It will be very helpful for me if I use comfortable shoes although fashionable shoes.

✓ It will be very helpful for me if I use comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes.

The conjunction 'although' is incorrectly used here. The correct conjunction to express preference is 'rather than'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.