Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızda daha aydın və təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, sualı birbaşa cavablandırın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin. Cümlələrinizi qısa və məntiqli saxlayın.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and I do it quite often. I have a large collection at home because I like to match my shoes with different outfits. That's why I buy shoes in many colors.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və məntiqli qurun. Əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin və qarışıqlıqdan qaçının. Məsələn, "because" və "so" kimi sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: Yes, I mostly buy shoes online because it is more convenient. I can order two sizes and keep the one that fits me, returning the other. So, I don't need to go to the store.

Suggestion: Cavabınızı daha dəqiq və aydın ifadə edin. Qiymətləri düzgün və məntiqli şəkildə təqdim edin. Məsələn, "I usually spend between 50 and 80 dollars on shoes because I prefer non-branded ones."

Example: Usually, I spend between 50 and 80 dollars on shoes because I rarely buy original branded ones.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və axıcı edin. "Both" sözünü istifadə edərkən səbəbləri də aydın şəkildə izah edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: I definitely prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because it is important to look good while feeling comfortable at the same time.

× Like I can say no one has like shoes that I have in house.

✓ Like I can say no one has shoes like the ones I have in my house.

The original sentence has incorrect plural usage and missing articles. 'Shoes that I have in house' is awkward; it should be 'shoes like the ones I have in my house' to correctly express comparison and include the definite article 'the' and possessive 'my'.

× Like I can say no one has like shoes that I have in house.

✓ Like I can say no one has shoes like the ones I have in my house.

The phrase 'in house' is missing the preposition 'my' before 'house' to indicate possession. Correct preposition usage requires 'in my house'.

× I can order two sides of the shoes and which is my like I keep it which is not my size.

✓ I can order two pairs of the shoes, and if one is my size, I keep it; if not, I don't keep it.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and phrases, making it unclear. 'Two sides of the shoes' should be 'two pairs of shoes'. Also, pronouns and clauses need to be clearer to express the intended meaning.

× I can order two sides of the shoes and which is my like I keep it which is not my size.

✓ I can order two pairs of the shoes, and if one is my size, I keep it; if not, I don't keep it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'which is my like I keep it which is not my size' which is confusing. Proper pronoun and clause structure is needed to clarify the meaning.

× I don't need to go anywhere for buying shoes or.

✓ I don't need to go anywhere to buy shoes.

The phrase 'for buying shoes' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' before the verb 'buy'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'or' which is unnecessary.

× Usually it depends on the shoes, but I don't spend lots of money on shoes because I don't buy the original 1.

✓ Usually it depends on the shoes, but I don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I don't buy the original ones.

'Lots of money' is acceptable but 'lots of money on shoes' is better as 'a lot of money'. Also, 'the original 1' is incorrect; it should be 'the original ones' to match plural 'shoes'.

× So rarely times I buy original umm shoes.

✓ So I rarely buy original shoes.

'Rarely times' is incorrect; 'rarely' alone is sufficient as an adverb to express frequency. Also, 'original umm shoes' should be 'original shoes' without hesitation sounds.

× But mostly I spend 50 or 80 minutes now money.

✓ But mostly I spend 50 or 80 money now.

The phrase '50 or 80 minutes now money' is incorrect and confusing. Likely, the student meant to say '50 or 80 money units' (currency), but 'minutes' is incorrect here. The sentence needs clarification and correction to express spending money, not time.

× But mostly I spend 50 or 80 minutes now money.

✓ But mostly I spend 50 or 80 units of money now.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'minutes' instead of a quantifier for money. The correction replaces 'minutes' with 'units of money' to clarify the meaning.

× I definitely prefer both of them because, uh, these are the important umm, alternatives that I need while buying shoes.

✓ I definitely prefer both because these are important alternatives I need when buying shoes.

'Both of them' is vague; 'both' suffices. Also, 'important umm, alternatives' is awkward; removing hesitation and unnecessary words improves clarity. 'While buying shoes' is better as 'when buying shoes'.