Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少具体细节。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体原因。

Example: I don't like buying shoes very often because I usually wear the ones I have until they are worn out. I think shoes just need to be practical for daily use.

Suggestion: 回答较完整，但语法和用词有误，句子不够流畅。建议注意语法正确性，使用连词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online because the internet offers a wide variety of options to choose from. Moreover, the prices are usually more reasonable compared to retail shops.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并补充具体细节。

Example: I usually spend around 200 RMB on a pair of shoes because I believe the quality nowadays is much better than before, so I can wear them for a long time without needing to buy new ones frequently.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但有语法错误和重复表达。建议注意语法一致性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I enjoy walking in the park and I walk to my workplace every day. Therefore, wearing comfortable shoes helps me feel at ease throughout the day.

× I don't like buying shoes because I think when we have to wear that is OK.

✓ I don't like buying shoes because I think when we have to wear them, it is OK.

这里缺少了代词的复数形式，'that' 应该用复数 'them' 来指代鞋子。

× because in Internet it just offers a variety of shoes for the custom to choose.

✓ because on the Internet it just offers a variety of shoes for the customer to choose from.

介词使用错误，应该用 'on the Internet' 表示在互联网上，且 'choose' 后面需要加介词 'from'。

× At the same time the price it is really reasonable and cheaper compare to the price in retail shops.

✓ At the same time, the price is really reasonable and cheaper compared to the price in retail shops.

句中多余的代词 'it' 应该去掉，且 'compare' 应该用过去分词 'compared'。

× So I usually spend around 200 RMB buying a pairs of shoes, because I think the quality nowadays of the shoe it is a much better than in the past and I can wear it for a long time, I don't need to.

✓ So I usually spend around 200 RMB buying a pair of shoes, because I think the quality of shoes nowadays is much better than in the past and I can wear them for a long time, so I don't need to buy frequently.

'a pairs' 是错误的，应该用单数 'a pair'。'shoe' 应该用复数 'shoes'，代词 'it' 应该用复数 'them'。句子末尾不完整，补充完整表达。

× You know, I prefer comfortable shoes because I like walking around the park. Also, I need to go to my workplace every days by walk, so wearing a pairs of comfortable shoes make me feel more comfortable.

✓ You know, I prefer comfortable shoes because I like walking around the park. Also, I need to go to my workplace every day by walking, so wearing a pair of comfortable shoes makes me feel more comfortable.

'every days' 应为单数 'every day'。'a pairs' 应为单数 'a pair'。动词 'make' 应与单数主语 'a pair' 一致，改为 'makes'。