Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy one pair every week. I enjoy new shoes because they look beautiful and are comfortable. Therefore, I often ask my mum to buy them for me.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct tense and clearer expressions. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer more logical and natural.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. I chose them because they had good reviews and the style was cute and fit me well. I usually buy shoes online for myself.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. Explain your answer with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I usually spend about $10 to $20 on one pair of shoes. The price depends on the model and the quality, which I consider carefully before buying.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by avoiding repetition and improving grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and concisely.

Example: I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes because they fit well and make walking easier for me.

× Yes I always buy your shoes like one one pair for a week.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes, like one pair per week.

The phrase 'your shoes' is incorrect because the student is talking about shoes in general, not shoes belonging to the examiner. Also, 'one one pair' is a repetition and 'for a week' should be 'per week' to indicate frequency. The noun 'shoes' is plural, but 'one pair' is singular, so the sentence should reflect that correctly.

× So I I really like a new shoes because it also have a beautiful and make me more comfortable so I always ask my mum to buy for me.

✓ So I really like new shoes because they are beautiful and make me more comfortable, so I always ask my mum to buy them for me.

The phrase 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'it also have a beautiful' is incorrect; 'it' should be 'they' to match the plural 'shoes', and 'have' should be 'are' or 'have' with a noun. The sentence needs plural pronouns and verbs to agree with 'shoes'.

× Yes I had on every day.

✓ Yes, I have bought them every day.

The phrase 'I had on every day' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The student likely means they have bought shoes every day. The correct past tense or present perfect tense should be used to express this action.

× I also buy some shoes from online because I saw the shoes that are reviewed with a good quality and the mall is so cute and fit for me and I also buy it for myself.

✓ I also buy some shoes online because I saw shoes that have good reviews, and the style is cute and fits me, so I also buy them for myself.

The phrase 'buy some shoes from online' is incorrect; 'online' does not require 'from'. Also, 'reviewed with a good quality' is awkward; it should be 'have good reviews'. 'Mall' is incorrect here; likely the student meant 'model' or 'style'. Pronouns should agree in number with 'shoes'.

× I usually spend about 10 to $20.00 for one pair because some are choose is depend on the model or more Forrester uh, the price and the quality is also fit each other.

✓ I usually spend about $10 to $20 for one pair because my choice depends on the model, price, and quality, which also match each other.

The phrase 'some are choose is depend' is incorrect; it should be 'my choice depends'. Also, 'Forrester' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. The sentence needs correction for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× I absolutely prefer to the comfortable shoes that make me more comfortable and fit with it and make me more easier when I walk.

✓ I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes that make me more comfortable, fit well, and make it easier for me to walk.

The phrase 'prefer to the comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'prefer' is followed directly by the object without 'to'. 'Fit with it' is incorrect; it should be 'fit well'. 'Make me more easier' is incorrect; 'more' is unnecessary before 'easier'. The sentence needs correction for prepositions and comparative forms.