Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
To be honest, yes, uh, I like buying shoes so much. Uh, maybe UH-2, UH-2 uh, times in uh, month or maybe one, it's uh, independent.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
No, because all, uh, shoes that I like it, it's very expensive, so I can't spend my money, uh, for uh, something I'm not sure, uh, for uh, for it. OK.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
I can't give you a special cost because the price of shoes is it's depend about, uh, the type of shoes. So it depends. OK, that's it.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
Both of them. For example, in my normal days, I prefer fashionable, uh, shoes, but when I, uh, go into, uh, the gym or to work, I prefer comfortable shoes.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Essayez d'exprimer votre réponse de manière plus claire et fluide, en évitant les hésitations et en donnant une fréquence précise. Par exemple, utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions inutiles.
Example: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy shoes about two times a month, but sometimes it depends on my needs.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Améliorez la clarté de votre réponse en structurant mieux vos idées et en évitant les hésitations. Expliquez clairement votre raison avec des phrases complètes.
Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because the shoes I like are usually expensive, and I prefer to see them in person before spending my money.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Donnez une réponse plus précise et évitez les répétitions. Essayez de fournir une estimation ou une fourchette de prix pour rendre votre réponse plus informative.
Example: I usually spend around 50 to 100 dollars on shoes, depending on the type and brand.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est bonne, mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en réduisant les hésitations et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour mieux structurer votre réponse.
Example: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For instance, I usually wear fashionable shoes on regular days, but when I go to the gym or work, I prefer comfortable ones.
Grammar
× maybe UH-2, UH-2 uh, times in uh, month or maybe one, it's uh, independent.
✓ maybe 2 times in a month or maybe once, it depends.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'UH-2' and 'times in uh, month' without proper pluralization and article usage. 'Times' should be pluralized correctly and 'month' should have the article 'a' before it. Also, 'it's uh, independent' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it depends'.
× No, because all, uh, shoes that I like it, it's very expensive, so I can't spend my money, uh, for uh, something I'm not sure, uh, for uh, for it. OK.
✓ No, because all the shoes that I like are very expensive, so I can't spend my money on something I'm not sure about. OK.
The sentence incorrectly uses the pronouns 'it' and 'it's' referring to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun usage should be 'are' for plural 'shoes'. Also, prepositions like 'on' and the phrase 'not sure about' are needed for clarity.
× I can't give you a special cost because the price of shoes is it's depend about, uh, the type of shoes.
✓ I can't give you a specific cost because the price of shoes depends on the type of shoes.
The phrase 'it's depend about' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' and the preposition 'on' should be used instead of 'about'. Also, 'special cost' is better expressed as 'specific cost'.
× I can't spend my money, uh, for uh, something I'm not sure, uh, for uh, for it.
✓ I can't spend my money on something I'm not sure about.
The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition is 'on' when talking about spending money. Also, 'not sure' should be followed by 'about' to complete the phrase.
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