Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek bar bar hoyeche. Apni chesta korun prothom e direct question er uttor dite, tarpor kichu specific details add korun. Sentence gulo shohoje bujhte parbe emon bhabe rakhun, ar linking words use korun jate answer ta natural lage.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes very much. I usually buy new shoes once a month because I enjoy collecting different types. For me, shoes are like a way to express my feelings. Therefore, I make sure to add at least one new pair to my collection every month.

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Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because I don't trust online shopping. For example, a few days ago, my friend ordered red shoes online but received white ones instead. This experience made me feel that online sellers can be dishonest.

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Example: I usually spend at least 5,000 taka per month on shoes because collecting shoes is very important to me. For example, I buy new sneakers like Jordans or other popular brands to add to my collection.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ar grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, tarpor specific karon diye support korun. Linking words use korun jate uttor ta logical ar natural lage.

Example: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they protect my feet when I go outside. For example, comfortable shoes help me walk longer without pain, so I usually choose them over fashionable ones.

× Certainly, I like to buy shop a minimum one month because I like so much shoes.

✓ Certainly, I like to buy shoes at least once a month because I like shoes very much.

The phrase 'a minimum one month' is an incorrect quantifier usage. It should be 'at least once a month' to express frequency correctly. Also, 'like so much shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'like shoes very much' to properly express degree.

× For my it is like my emotion.

✓ For me, it is like my emotion.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used instead of 'me' as the object of the preposition 'for'. The correct phrase is 'For me'. This is a common pronoun usage error.

× That's why minimum one month later I buy minimum one shows.

✓ That's why at least once a month I buy at least one pair of shoes.

'Minimum one month later' and 'minimum one shows' are incorrect quantifier and noun usage. 'At least once a month' correctly expresses frequency, and 'one pair of shoes' is the correct singular/plural form for shoes.

× No, definitely no because I don't like these things online because I few days ago I shows my friend bought a shoe online.

✓ No, definitely not because I don't like these things online. A few days ago, my friend bought a shoe online.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors. 'I few days ago I shows my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'A few days ago, my friend'. Also, 'definitely no' should be 'definitely not' for negation.

× This online man is very cheater order in red color shoes.

✓ This online seller is a very cheater; he ordered red shoes.

'Very cheater' is incorrect quantifier and noun usage. 'Cheater' is a noun and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'order in red color shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'ordered red shoes'.

× He gave him white color shoes.

✓ He gave him white shoes.

'White color shoes' is redundant; 'white shoes' is sufficient. Also, the pronouns are correct here but the phrase needs simplification.

× In a month minimum 5 Ki spend for my shoes because shoes collection it is the best thing for me.

✓ In a month, I spend at least 5K on my shoes because collecting shoes is the best thing for me.

'Minimum 5 Ki spend for my shoes' is incorrect quantifier and sentence structure. It should be 'I spend at least 5K on my shoes'. Also, 'shoes collection it is the best thing' is awkward; 'collecting shoes is the best thing' is better.

× That's why minimum 5K money I spend in a month for shoes new collection like sneaker, Jordan or car.

✓ That's why I spend at least 5K a month on new shoe collections like sneakers, Jordans, or Converse.

'Minimum 5K money I spend' is incorrect quantifier and word order. 'Sneaker, Jordan or car' are incorrect or incomplete; 'sneakers, Jordans, or Converse' are proper nouns and plural forms.

× I definitely I prefer is comfortable shoes because when we are we are comfortable shoes, it is the best things like when we are go outside and go outside and it is best for our leg.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because when we wear comfortable shoes, it is the best thing, especially when we go outside, and it is best for our legs.

The sentence has pronoun and verb errors. 'I definitely I prefer is comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'I definitely prefer comfortable shoes'. 'When we are we are comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'when we wear comfortable shoes'. Also, 'best things' should be singular 'best thing', and 'our leg' should be plural 'our legs'.

× That's why usually I buy.

✓ That's why I usually buy them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'them' clarifies what is being bought, improving sentence structure.