Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "that too branded" and try to use clearer expressions. Also, specify the frequency more precisely and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like buying branded shoes, and I usually purchase new pairs every six months or once a year.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more coherent and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like "not even fake brand anything". Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer descriptions.

Example: Yes, I recently bought a pair of Nike Jordan low-top shoes online. The packaging was excellent, and I was happy to receive an authentic product.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about the amount or range if possible.

Example: I usually spend quite a bit on shoes because I prefer branded ones that are comfortable for walking. I think it's worth investing in expensive shoes that can last for a year or two.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition of the word "comfort" and by adding linking words for better flow. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

Example: I always prefer comfortable shoes because they support my feet well and allow me to walk long distances without pain.

× Yes, I like buying shoes that too branded and I usually buy shoes every six months or every one year.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, especially branded ones, and I usually buy shoes every six months or every year.

The phrase 'that too branded' is incorrect. 'That too' is not used to modify adjectives properly. Instead, 'especially branded ones' correctly emphasizes the preference for branded shoes. Also, 'every one year' is better expressed as 'every year' for naturalness.

× Yes, recently I have bought Nike Jordan low tongue shoes online and it really came with awesome packaging.

✓ Yes, recently I bought Nike Jordan low tongue shoes online and they really came with awesome packaging.

The present perfect tense 'have bought' is acceptable with 'recently', but simple past 'bought' is more natural here. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes' (plural and singular issue).

× Everything good, not even fake brand anything.

✓ Everything was good, not even a fake brand or anything.

The sentence lacks a verb and proper article usage. 'Everything good' should be 'Everything was good' to form a complete sentence. 'Fake brand anything' is incorrect; it should be 'a fake brand or anything' to make sense.

× Well, I spend a lot of money on shoes, especially I'm looking for a brand.

✓ Well, I spend a lot of money on shoes, especially when I'm looking for a brand.

The sentence is missing a conjunction to connect the clauses properly. Adding 'when' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'a brand' is acceptable here as it refers to a single brand preference.

× I need a shoes that is more comfortable while I'm walking.

✓ I need shoes that are more comfortable while I'm walking.

'Shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed and the verb should be plural 'are' instead of 'is' to agree with the plural subject.

× So it's better if I take a costly shoes and wear it for years or maybe two years.

✓ So it's better if I buy costly shoes and wear them for years or maybe two years.

'Shoes' is plural, so 'a costly shoes' is incorrect; 'costly shoes' without 'a' is correct. Also, 'take' is less appropriate than 'buy' in this context. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.

× I always prefer comfortable shoes as it gives more comfort to your leg and it helps you to walk for kilometers.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes as they give more comfort to your legs and help you walk for kilometers.

'Shoes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, 'leg' should be plural 'legs' because shoes are worn on both feet. The phrase 'helps you to walk' is better as 'help you walk' for naturalness.