Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "a way to express myself" ifadesinden önce "and" bağlacını kullanmak daha akıcı olur. Ayrıca "a good shoe" yerine "good shoes" kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi 5 cümleyi geçmeden daha net ve akıcı yapmaya çalışın.

Example: I love buying shoes because they complete an outfit and are a way to express myself. However, I usually buy shoes only once a year since good quality shoes are quite expensive.

Suggestion: Cevabınız kısa ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha doğal ve etkili cevaplar için tekrarları azaltmalı ve cümleleri bağlayıcı ifadelerle birleştirmelisiniz. Ayrıca "a shoes" ifadesi yanlıştır, "a pair of shoes" veya sadece "shoes" demelisiniz.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online when there was a discount. As soon as I saw the offer, I decided to purchase a pair because it was a great deal.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tutarsızlıklar var. "a comfortable shoes" yerine "comfortable shoes" veya "a comfortable pair of shoes" demelisiniz. Ayrıca "I wanted" geçmiş zaman, burada şimdiki zaman daha uygun. Cümlelerinizi bağlayıcı ifadelerle daha akıcı yapmalısınız.

Example: It depends. If I want comfortable shoes, I usually spend around 3000 Turkish liras because comfort is important to me. However, for casual shoes, the price is not a big concern.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde "I used to don't look" ifadesi yanlıştır, "I didn't use to care about" veya "I didn't pay attention to" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca "a shoe" yerine "shoes" kullanmalısınız. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanın.

Example: I used to prefer fashionable shoes and didn't pay much attention to comfort. However, now that I am older, I prioritize comfort when buying shoes.

× I love buying shoes because I think they can complete an outfit and a way to express myself.

✓ I love buying shoes because I think they can complete an outfit and are a way to express myself.

The original sentence lacks a verb in the second part of the sentence after 'and'. To connect two ideas properly, the second part needs a verb. Adding 'are' correctly links 'a way to express myself' to the previous clause.

× But I buy shoes once a year because it's not cheap to buy good shoe.

✓ But I buy shoes once a year because it's not cheap to buy good shoes.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to shoes in general, not a single shoe. Using the plural form is correct when talking about items in general or multiple items.

× I should buy a shoes.

✓ I should buy shoes.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× if I'm going to buy a comfortable shoes I usually spend around 3000 Turkish liras because I wanted the comfort.

✓ if I'm going to buy comfortable shoes I usually spend around 3000 Turkish liras because I want the comfort.

'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to match the present tense context. Removing 'a' and changing 'wanted' to 'want' corrects the sentence.

× But if I'm going to buy a casual shoe it doesn't matter how much is it.

✓ But if I'm going to buy a casual shoe it doesn't matter how much it is.

The phrase 'how much is it' is incorrect word order for indirect questions. The correct order is 'how much it is'. This corrects the sentence structure.

× I used to don't look at how comfortable it is.

✓ I used to not look at how comfortable it is.

The phrase 'used to don't' is incorrect. The correct form is 'used to not' or 'didn't use to'. 'Used to' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'do/does'. Changing to 'used to not look' corrects the sentence.