Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct adverbs and verb forms to sound more natural. For example, instead of 'don't oftenly buy every day', say 'I don't buy shoes often, maybe every two or three months.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'buying shoes' unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. Usually, I purchase new shoes every two or three months.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use past tense correctly. Instead of 'it's really worse experience', say 'it was a bad experience'. Also, try to make your sentences clearer and more concise.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Once, I ordered shoes without knowing my exact size, and it was a bad experience because they didn't fit well.

Suggestion: Try to clarify your ideas and avoid filler words like 'umm'. For example, explain why you spend less money and how often you buy shoes more clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I prefer to buy trendy ones. Therefore, I only buy new shoes every few months, not very often.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'to be honest' which can be redundant. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' properly. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

Example: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because I wear fashionable ones to events, and comfortable shoes for work and walking.

× I don't oftenly buy every day.

✓ I don't often buy shoes every day.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'buy every day' is awkward; adding 'shoes' clarifies the object and improves sentence flow.

× I just buying shoes after two or three months.

✓ I just buy shoes every two or three months.

The verb 'buying' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I just buy'. Also, 'after two or three months' is better expressed as 'every two or three months' to indicate frequency.

× at the time I just, uh, buying shoes for the first time

✓ at the time I was just buying shoes for the first time

The verb 'buying' requires an auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past continuous tense, indicating an action in progress in the past.

× it's really worse experience.

✓ it was really a bad experience.

The word 'worse' is comparative and requires a comparison; here, 'bad' is the correct adjective. Also, 'experience' is a countable noun and needs an article 'a'. The verb tense should be past 'was' to match the past context.

× I don't spend too much money on the shoes because I like to wear the trending shoes.

✓ I don't spend too much money on shoes because I like to wear trending shoes.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before plural nouns when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× That's why I just buy shoes after a long time, not umm, after some days or after some weeks.

✓ That's why I only buy shoes after a long time, not after a few days or weeks.

The adverb 'just' is better replaced with 'only' for clarity. Also, 'some days or some weeks' is better expressed as 'a few days or weeks' for naturalness.

× I can also, uh, wear their shoes for when I usually go to the walk.

✓ I can also wear those shoes when I usually go for a walk.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here; 'those' refers to shoes previously mentioned. Also, 'go to the walk' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go for a walk'.