Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb forms and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't buy them often, maybe once a year, because I prefer quality shoes that last longer."

Example: I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't buy them often, maybe once a year, because I prefer quality shoes that last longer.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times, but it was often disappointing because the sizes were inaccurate or the colors looked different from the pictures."

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times, but it was often disappointing because the sizes were inaccurate or the colors looked different from the pictures.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like "not law over than 3000". Use linking words to explain your reasons. For example, "I don't have a strict budget, but I prefer not to spend too much on shoes because I want to save money for more important things."

Example: I don't have a strict budget, but I prefer not to spend too much on shoes because I want to save money for more important things.

Suggestion: Make your answer complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to compare past and present preferences. For example, "When I was a teenager, I focused on trendy, fashionable shoes because I wanted to look stylish. However, now I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for my feet."

Example: When I was a teenager, I focused on trendy, fashionable shoes because I wanted to look stylish. However, now I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for my feet.

× Yes, I do enjoy buying shoes but I usually not buy it very often, maybe around once a year or even late because I prefer buying quality shoes and it can last longer.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy buying shoes but I usually do not buy them very often, maybe around once a year or even later because I prefer buying quality shoes and they can last longer.

The sentence has a present tense issue with the phrase 'usually not buy it'. In English, when using 'usually' with a negative, the auxiliary 'do' is required: 'usually do not buy'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Additionally, 'late' should be 'later' to indicate a later time. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I did buy shoes online for a couple times but it always was disappointing because of the mistakes that happened such as in accurate size or different colors like it's look not the same as.

✓ I bought shoes online a couple of times but it was always disappointing because of mistakes such as inaccurate sizes or different colors that did not look the same.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did buy' and 'for a couple times'. The simple past 'bought' is more natural here. 'For a couple times' should be 'a couple of times'. 'It always was' should be 'it was always' for natural word order. 'In accurate size' should be 'inaccurate sizes' to correct the adjective and plural form. 'Like it's look not the same as' is ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'that did not look the same' for clarity and correctness.

× Well I don't really have a budget plan for that, but I prefer not to buy shoes that too expensive. I would say maybe not law over than 3000 but because I prefer saving those some money for important thing.

✓ Well, I don't really have a budget plan for that, but I prefer not to buy shoes that are too expensive. I would say maybe not over 3000 because I prefer saving some money for important things.

The phrase 'shoes that too expensive' is missing the verb 'are'. 'Not law over than 3000' is incorrect; it should be 'not over 3000'. 'Those some money' is incorrect quantifier usage; 'some money' is correct. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to generalize. These corrections fix quantifier and article usage for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well when I was younger I mean around teenager I used to focus only trendy or fashionable shoes because I did want to look stylish.

✓ Well, when I was younger, I mean around my teenage years, I used to focus only on trendy or fashionable shoes because I wanted to look stylish.

The phrase 'around teenager' is incorrect; it should be 'around my teenage years'. 'Focus only trendy' needs the preposition 'on' to be 'focus only on trendy'. 'I did want' is grammatically correct but unnatural here; simple past 'I wanted' is preferred. These corrections improve tense usage and prepositional accuracy.

× But as I have grown up I prefer buying shoes by it's comfortable because and.

✓ But as I have grown up, I prefer buying shoes because they are comfortable.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'By it's comfortable because and' is incorrect. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary words and uses 'because they are comfortable' to clearly express the reason. This fixes sentence structure errors and improves clarity.