Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
I just don't like buying shoes. I love them. So I have a collection, uh, with, umm, six pair of shoes. And then there is the other, uh, five pair of shoes and they're not the same brand or same color ever.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
I always bought my shoes online because when I go to the store I don't feel like I'm gonna find my thing or find what I like. So I always bought them online and umm.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
I actually don't buy them with my money because I don't work, but umm, I will say probably a half a million because I love boating shoes. It is like that.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
On a daily basis, I would prefer comfortable shoes. I love sports shoes, but when it comes to uh, events or I don't know, going to somewhere special, I would say I prefer fashionable shoes for it.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimelerden kaçının. Ayrıca, cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırın ve destekleyici detayları bağlaçlarla mantıklı şekilde ekleyin.
Example: Yes, I love buying shoes and have a collection of about eleven pairs. They are all different brands and colors because I enjoy variety.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için dolgu kelimeleri azaltın ve cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayarak mantıklı bir yapı oluşturun. Ayrıca, geçmiş zaman ve alışkanlıkları doğru kullanmaya dikkat edin.
Example: Yes, I usually buy my shoes online because I rarely find what I like in stores, so online shopping is more convenient for me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Cevabınızda belirsiz ifadeler ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. Daha açık ve spesifik olun. Ayrıca, para birimi ve miktarını net belirtin ve gereksiz dolgu kelimelerden kaçının.
Example: I don't usually spend my own money on shoes since I don't work, but I think I would spend around 500 dollars because I really like boating shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için dolgu kelimeleri azaltın ve bağlaçlarla destekleyici detayları daha iyi bağlayın. Ayrıca, ifadelerinizi daha net ve kendinden emin kullanın.
Example: I prefer comfortable shoes like sports shoes for everyday use, but for special events, I choose fashionable shoes to look more stylish.
Grammar
× I have a collection, uh, with, umm, six pair of shoes.
✓ I have a collection, uh, with, umm, six pairs of shoes.
The word 'pair' should be pluralized to 'pairs' when referring to more than one. 'Six pair' is incorrect because 'pair' is a countable noun and needs to agree in number with the quantity.
× And then there is the other, uh, five pair of shoes and they're not the same brand or same color ever.
✓ And then there are the other, uh, five pairs of shoes and they're not the same brand or same color ever.
Since 'five pairs' refers to multiple items, the verb should be plural 'are' instead of 'is', and 'pair' should be pluralized to 'pairs' to match the quantity.
× I always bought my shoes online because when I go to the store I don't feel like I'm gonna find my thing or find what I like.
✓ I always buy my shoes online because when I go to the store I don't feel like I'm gonna find my thing or find what I like.
The adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present simple tense 'buy' instead of the past tense 'bought'.
× So I always bought them online and umm.
✓ So I always buy them online and umm.
Same as above, 'always' indicates a habitual action, so the present simple tense 'buy' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'bought'.
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