Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about when and why you buy shoes, using correct verb tenses.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes. Usually, I buy new ones at the start of each school term because they make me feel comfortable and confident.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, I recently bought a pair of shoes from an Instagram page. The quality was very good, and I found them comfortable. I prefer buying shoes online because they are often cheaper.

Suggestion: Use correct verb tenses and clearer phrasing. Specify the currency to avoid confusion and provide more details about why you choose that price range.

Example: Usually, I spend around 3000 rupees on a pair of shoes because I want good quality at an affordable price.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correct verb tenses. Avoid repeating the same idea and explain your preference clearly.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel confident and are durable for daily use, which is more important to me than fashion.

× When my new school session has started I buy new shoes.

✓ When my new school session starts, I buy new shoes.

The sentence requires the simple present tense 'starts' to indicate a habitual action, not the present perfect 'has started'.

× When I wear these shoes I felt very comfortable and relaxed and I also prefer to all to buying shoes because it give you relax.

✓ When I wear these shoes, I feel very comfortable and relaxed, and I also prefer buying shoes because they give you relaxation.

The sentence mixes present tense 'wear' with past tense 'felt'; it should consistently use present tense 'feel' to describe current feelings. Also, 'give you relax' is incorrect; it should be 'give you relaxation' or 'make you feel relaxed'.

× Yes, recently I bought a shoes from an Instagram page and the quality of the shoes are very good and when I wear this shoes I felt very comfortable and I also prefer to all to buy shoes with low price from online websites.

✓ Yes, recently I bought shoes from an Instagram page and the quality of the shoes is very good. When I wear these shoes, I feel very comfortable, and I also prefer to buy shoes at a low price from online websites.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'the quality of the shoes are' should be 'is' because 'quality' is singular. 'This shoes' should be 'these shoes' to match plural form. 'Felt' should be 'feel' to maintain present tense.

× Well, usually I bought a pair of shoes with cheaper price around $3000 and the quality of the shoes are good.

✓ Well, usually I buy a pair of shoes at a cheaper price around $3000, and the quality of the shoes is good.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the verb should be in the present tense 'buy' instead of past 'bought'. Also, 'the quality of the shoes are' should be 'is' because 'quality' is singular.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because when you wear shoes, you felt very confident and comfortable and it is very durable for your daily routines.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because when you wear shoes, you feel very confident and comfortable, and they are very durable for your daily routines.

The sentence mixes present tense 'wear' with past tense 'felt'; it should be 'feel' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'it is very durable' should be 'they are very durable' to agree with plural 'shoes'.