Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about when and why you buy shoes.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often. Usually, when I go out with my friends or family, I visit a supermarket and sometimes buy shoes there. I enjoy buying fancy shoes because they look good and make me feel confident.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons and give specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I prefer buying shoes online because it is very convenient and saves time. For example, a couple of months ago, I bought a pair of shoes online and they were of good quality.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more structured by using correct grammar and linking words. Specify the amount clearly and explain why you spend that much. Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

Example: Generally, I spend a large amount of money on shoes because I am fascinated by them. When I visit supermarkets, I look for shoes and if I have enough money, I buy them. Usually, I spend around 6000 taka per month on shoes.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing filler words and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and keep sentences concise.

Example: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion. For example, I wear fashionable shoes to weddings because they attract attention. However, when I go for a walk, I choose comfortable shoes to feel relaxed.

× Yes, I like buying shoe.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to buying shoes in general, which is a countable noun and usually used in plural form when talking about buying more than one.

× It's quite often when I go outside with my friend and family that time if I go any so super shop that time I buy shoes.

✓ I quite often buy shoes when I go outside with my friends and family, especially if I go to any super shop.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'With my friend and family' should be 'with my friends and family' (plural). 'If I go any so super shop' is incorrect; it should be 'if I go to any super shop'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer buy shoes from online and not only shoe, but also any product I prefer to buy online because it's really convenient for me, especially for time saving uh like uh last couple of months ago I bought a shoe from online, which was really uh well.

✓ Yes, I prefer to buy shoes online, and not only shoes but also any product. I prefer to buy online because it's really convenient for me, especially for saving time. For example, a couple of months ago I bought shoes online, which was really good.

The sentence has issues with quantifiers and article usage. 'Buy shoes from online' should be 'buy shoes online'. 'Not only shoe' should be 'not only shoes'. 'Last couple of months ago' should be 'a couple of months ago'. Also, 'which was really uh well' is corrected to 'which was really good' for clarity.

× Generally, I spend huge amount of money to buy shoes because it is my one kind of fascination when I go any kind of super shop, that time I finding shoes and after that if I have cash, I try to buy uh, so you can call around UH-6000 a month.

✓ Generally, I spend a huge amount of money to buy shoes because it is one of my fascinations. When I go to any kind of super shop, I look for shoes and if I have cash, I try to buy them. So, you can say around 6000 Taka a month.

The phrase 'huge amount of money' needs the article 'a'. 'My one kind of fascination' is corrected to 'one of my fascinations'. 'Go any kind of super shop' should be 'go to any kind of super shop'. 'I finding shoes' should be 'I look for shoes'. 'Try to buy uh' is completed to 'try to buy them'. Currency unit 'UH-6000' is clarified to '6000 Taka'.

× I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes. Uh, it depends on the occasion. Like if I go any kind of wedding, that time I prefer to wear fashionable shoes because it's really, uh, attracting for people, uh, as well as when I go outside, uh, for walking that time I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes. It depends on the occasion. For example, if I go to any kind of wedding, I prefer to wear fashionable shoes because they are really attractive to people. Also, when I go outside for walking, I prefer comfortable shoes.

'If I go any kind of wedding' should be 'if I go to any kind of wedding'. 'Attracting for people' is incorrect; it should be 'attractive to people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.