Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have three types: sandals, athletic shoes, and daily shoes. Usually, I only buy new ones when the old ones are worn out.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: Yes, I have bought sandals online using an app called Shopee. I was attracted by the product's design, so I decided to purchase it.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và nói rõ hơn về số tiền bạn chi tiêu.

Example: I don't buy shoes often, but when I do, I usually spend less than 510 thousand Vietnamese dong because I think shoes are not a necessary item to buy frequently.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích lý do rõ ràng hơn và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer fashionable shoes because looking good is more important to me than comfort. As the saying goes, beauty is pain, so I enjoy wearing stylish shoes even if they are less comfortable.

× Correlate I have own umm three types of shoes which is my sandals, my athletic shoes and another is the shoes that I use it daily so I don't usually buy it because I don't know why I.

✓ Actually, I own three types of shoes: my sandals, my athletic shoes, and another pair that I use daily, so I don't usually buy shoes because I don't know why.

The sentence has singular and plural agreement issues, such as 'three types of shoes which is' should be 'three types of shoes which are' or better rephrased. Also, 'another is the shoes' is incorrect; 'another pair' fits better. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarity. Correcting singular/plural forms and sentence clarity improves understanding.

× The sandals is from online shop when I use an app called Shopee and as close to that product I was attracted and it prompted me to purchase it.

✓ The sandals are from an online shop; I used an app called Shopee, and I was attracted to that product, which prompted me to purchase it.

'The sandals is' is incorrect because 'sandals' is plural and requires 'are'. Also, 'as close to that product I was attracted' is awkward; it should be 'I was attracted to that product'. Correct plural verb agreement and preposition usage are necessary.

× The sandals is from online shop when I use an app called Shopee and as close to that product I was attracted and it prompted me to purchase it.

✓ The sandals are from an online shop; I used an app called Shopee, and I was attracted to that product, which prompted me to purchase it.

The phrase 'as close to that product I was attracted' misuses the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'I was attracted to that product'. Proper preposition use is essential for clarity.

× Yes I did it.

✓ Yes, I did.

The phrase 'Yes I did it' is unnatural in this context. The correct response to 'Have you ever bought shoes online?' is 'Yes, I did.' The verb 'did' already implies the action, so 'it' is unnecessary.

× The sandals is from online shop when I use an app called Shopee and as close to that product I was attracted and it prompted me to purchase it.

✓ The sandals are from an online shop; I used an app called Shopee, and I was attracted to that product, which prompted me to purchase it.

Repeated for clarity: 'sandals' is plural and requires 'are' instead of 'is'.

× As I said early, I don't usually buy shoes so I cannot count for that e-mail, but I think it would umm, maybe under 510 thousand Vietnamese because I don't think it's uh, necessary items. So maybe just a few is enough.

✓ As I said earlier, I don't usually buy shoes, so I cannot give an exact amount, but I think it would be maybe under 510 thousand Vietnamese dong because I don't think shoes are necessary items. So maybe just a few pairs are enough.

The sentence misuses quantifiers and articles, such as 'count for that e-mail' which is unclear, and 'just a few is enough' which should agree in number with the noun. Also, 'necessary items' should be plural to match 'shoes'. Correct quantifier and plural agreement improve clarity.

× As I said early, I don't usually buy shoes so I cannot count for that e-mail, but I think it would umm, maybe under 510 thousand Vietnamese because I don't think it's uh, necessary items. So maybe just a few is enough.

✓ As I said earlier, I don't usually buy shoes, so I cannot give an exact amount, but I think it would be maybe under 510 thousand Vietnamese dong because I don't think shoes are necessary items. So maybe just a few pairs are enough.

The phrase 'count for that e-mail' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'give an exact amount'. Also, 'under 510 thousand Vietnamese' lacks the currency unit 'dong'. Proper preposition and phrase usage are needed.

× I could say the first one because for me the perfect look is more important than my comfort, comfortable so.

✓ I would say the first one because, for me, the perfect look is more important than comfort.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'comfort, comfortable' together; 'comfort' is a noun and 'comfortable' is an adjective. The phrase should use the noun 'comfort' to compare with 'perfect look'. Also, 'could say' is less appropriate than 'would say' here.

× I could say the first one because for me the perfect look is more important than my comfort, comfortable so.

✓ I would say the first one because, for me, the perfect look is more important than comfort.

The conjunction 'so' at the end is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity.

× And they also say that beauty is a band, so I can enjoy it to be more fashionable.

✓ And they also say that beauty is a brand, so I can enjoy being more fashionable.

The word 'band' is incorrect; it should be 'brand'. Also, 'enjoy it to be more fashionable' is awkward; 'enjoy being more fashionable' is correct. Pronoun and word choice corrections improve meaning.