Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incorrect verb forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers. I usually buy new shoes every two to three months because I save money specifically for that purpose.

Suggestion: Use past tense correctly and structure your answer clearly. Begin with a direct response, then explain your experience with linking words like 'but' or 'however' to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online once. The shoes looked amazing in the photos, but when I received them, the quality was disappointing, so I returned them.

Suggestion: Be clear and specific about the amount you spend, and avoid unrealistic figures. Structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'sometimes' and 'usually'.

Example: Usually, I spend around 2,000 to 3,000 rupees on shoes. Sometimes I save my pocket money, and other times I get help from my parents to buy them.

Suggestion: Make your answer grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'because' to explain your preference with specific examples.

Example: I prefer different shoes depending on the occasion. Sometimes, I wear fashionable shoes when I go to parties, but usually, I choose comfortable shoes because they are better for daily use.

× Is your side like to buying shoes?

✓ Do you like buying shoes?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Is your side' instead of 'Do you'. The correct pronoun and auxiliary verb for asking about preferences is 'Do you'. This correction aligns with standard English question formation.

× Is your side like to buying shoes?

✓ Do you like buying shoes?

The phrase 'like to buying' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by either the base form 'to buy' or the gerund 'buying', but not both together. Here, 'like buying' is correct.

× I like to buy sneakers and uh, I often buy shoes.

✓ I like buying sneakers and, uh, I often buy shoes.

While 'like to buy' is not incorrect, 'like buying' is more natural when expressing general preferences. This correction improves fluency.

× in two to three months I'm buy a new shoes.

✓ In two to three months, I will buy new shoes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm buy' instead of the future tense 'I will buy'. Also, 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'.

× in two to three months I'm buy a new shoes.

✓ In two to three months, I will buy new shoes.

The phrase 'a new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The article should be removed or the noun changed to singular.

× Yes, one time I buy shoes online and in the photo the shoes was very amazing but when the shoes in my hands I touched them and it is not the quality that is shown in photos so I return them.

✓ Yes, one time I bought shoes online and in the photo the shoes were very amazing but when the shoes were in my hands I touched them and they were not the quality that was shown in photos so I returned them.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs 'buy', 'was', 'is', and 'return' when describing past events. Past tense forms 'bought', 'were', 'were', and 'returned' are required for consistency.

× when the shoes in my hands I touched them and it is not the quality that is shown in photos

✓ when the shoes were in my hands I touched them and they were not the quality that was shown in photos

The phrase 'when the shoes in my hands' lacks the verb 'were' to indicate existence or location. Also, 'it is not the quality' should be 'they were not the quality' to agree with plural 'shoes' and past tense.

× it is not the quality that is shown in photos so I return them.

✓ they were not the quality that was shown in photos so I returned them.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'shoes'; 'they' is correct. Also, tense consistency requires past tense verbs 'were' and 'returned'.

× Sometimes I take money from my parents and sometimes I save money for my shoes and from my pocket money so that I can buy them.

✓ Sometimes I take money from my parents and sometimes I save money for my shoes from my pocket money so that I can buy them.

The phrase 'and from my pocket money' is incorrectly connected with 'and'. Removing 'and' clarifies that saving money is from pocket money.

× Usually I spend 22223000 rupees.

✓ Usually I spend 22,223,000 rupees.

The number should be formatted with commas for clarity. No grammatical error but formatting improves readability.

× Yeah, it is depending upon the occasion that what occasion I was going on.

✓ Yeah, it depends on the occasion and what occasion I am going to.

'It is depending' is incorrect; 'it depends' is correct. Also, 'that what occasion I was going on' is awkward; 'and what occasion I am going to' is clearer and uses present tense for habitual actions.

× Sometimes I wear a fashionable shoes in when I was going into party or something and sometime I we are comfortable shoes because comfort.

✓ Sometimes I wear fashionable shoes when I am going to a party or something, and sometimes I wear comfortable shoes because of comfort.

'A fashionable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'In when' is incorrect; 'when' alone suffices. 'I was going into party' should be 'I am going to a party' for present habitual action. 'Sometime I we are' is incorrect; should be 'sometimes I wear'. Added 'because of comfort' for clarity.