Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va noaniq ifodalar mavjud. Ingliz tilida aniq va tabiiy gapirish uchun, jumlalarni qisqa va to'g'ri tuzishga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I don't like buying shoes because I find it difficult to find comfortable ones." kabi oddiy va aniq gaplar ishlating.

Example: I don't like buying shoes because I often find it hard to choose comfortable ones that fit me well.

Suggestion: Javobingizda gaplar biroz chalkash va noaniq. Ingliz tilida mantiqiy bog'lanishni yaxshilash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va gaplarni aniqroq tuzing. Masalan, "Last year, I asked my sister to buy football shoes online from China, and I received them within two weeks."

Example: Last year, I asked my sister to order football shoes online from China, and I received them within two weeks.

Suggestion: Javobingizda raqamlar va fikrlar chalkash ifodalangan. Ingliz tilida aniq va to'g'ri gapirish uchun, raqamlarni aniq ayting va gaplarni to'liq tuzing. Masalan, "The last time I bought shoes, they cost about $40 or $50. Usually, I don't spend more than $20 or $15 on shoes."

Example: The last time I bought shoes, they cost about $40 or $50. Usually, I don't spend more than $20 or $15 on shoes.

Suggestion: Javobingizda so'z tanlash va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Ingliz tilida aniq va tabiiy gapirish uchun, oddiy va to'g'ri so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day and comfort is important to me."

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day, and comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× it's too, uh, income inconvenient to bring a shoes which convenient for me

✓ it's too inconvenient to bring shoes that are convenient for me

The phrase 'income inconvenient' is incorrect; 'too inconvenient' is the correct expression. Also, 'a shoes' is wrong because 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'. The relative clause should use 'that are' to refer to plural 'shoes'. Use 'shoes' without 'a' and correct the relative clause for clarity.

× when I asked to my sister and bought, uh, football shoes for my football game

✓ when I asked my sister and bought football shoes for my football game

The verb 'ask' does not require the preposition 'to' before the object. The correct form is 'asked my sister', not 'asked to my sister'.

× I mowed shoes approximately 440 or $50

✓ I bought shoes for approximately $40 or $50

The word 'mowed' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'bought'. Also, the number '440' seems to be a mistake; likely intended is '40'. The sentence should use 'bought shoes' to indicate past purchase.

× it's at most at least I bought shoes for $20 and $15

✓ at most, I bought shoes for $20 and at least for $15

The phrase 'at most at least' is confusing and incorrect. It should be separated to express the range properly: 'at most' and 'at least' with appropriate commas and prepositions.

× I'm not buying so such kind of expensive shoes

✓ I'm not buying such kind of expensive shoes

The phrase 'so such kind of' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'such kind of' or simply 'such expensive shoes'.

× I don't like such kind of faces and other things

✓ I don't like such kinds of fashions and other things

The word 'faces' is incorrect in this context; likely intended is 'fashions'. Also, 'such kind of' should be pluralized to 'such kinds of' when referring to multiple items.

× I'm just living with my convenience base

✓ I'm just living based on my convenience

The phrase 'living with my convenience base' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'living based on my convenience' or 'living for my convenience'.