Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating phrases and unclear expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy new ones every month because my old shoes wear out quickly. For example, I often replace my running shoes to stay comfortable during exercise.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and use correct grammar. Explain reasons with specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online twice. I prefer online shopping because I can find more options that match what I imagine, which are not always available in physical stores.

Suggestion: Provide a clear amount and explain why you spend that much. Avoid hesitation and unclear words. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I usually spend around 50 rials on shoes because here we have affordable shoes with good quality, so I don't need to spend a lot.

Suggestion: Try to complete your sentences and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and give examples.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes for daily use because they are better for my feet. However, for special occasions like weddings, I choose fashionable heels to match my outfit.

× I usually buy shoes almost every month.

✓ I usually buy shoes almost every month.

No correction needed here as 'shoes' is correctly used in plural form.

× I should bring new shoes because I don't know.

✓ I should buy new shoes because I don't know why.

The verb 'bring' is incorrect in this context; 'buy' is appropriate when talking about purchasing shoes. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'why' clarifies the meaning.

× I feel the old one it's and and I don't know.

✓ I feel the old ones are worn out, and I don't know.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Old one' should be plural 'old ones' to match 'shoes'. The phrase 'it's and and' is incorrect and should be replaced with a clear statement.

× So if I buy every month, I know I decide to buy shoes for.

✓ So if I buy every month, I know I have decided to buy shoes.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'I decide to buy shoes for' is incorrect; it should be 'I have decided to buy shoes' to express a decision.

× Yeah, not twice, absolutely.

✓ Yeah, not twice, absolutely.

No correction needed; the sentence is short but grammatically acceptable.

× I think it's usually I buy online because I can't, I couldn't find my what I want or what's in my image, in my mind in the shop, shoe shops.

✓ I think I usually buy online because I can't find what I want or what I imagine in shoe shops.

The sentence is confusing and contains unnecessary words. 'It's usually I buy online' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually buy online'. 'My what I want' is incorrect; it should be 'what I want'. 'What's in my image, in my mind' is better expressed as 'what I imagine'.

× So I go to online because it's offer a lot of options.

✓ So I go online because it offers a lot of options.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'online'. Also, 'it's offer' should be 'it offers' to agree with the singular subject.

× Uh, not much, uh, around like darials because we have here no one like we have uh, uh, I would say she cheaper SHO sha shoes jobs and the quality is good.

✓ Uh, not much, around like dirhams because here we have some cheaper shoe shops and the quality is good.

The sentence is unclear and contains many filler words. 'Darials' is likely 'dirhams'. 'No one like we have' is incorrect; it should be 'here we have some'. 'She cheaper SHO sha shoes jobs' is unclear and corrected to 'some cheaper shoe shops'.

× So we're not we don't need.

✓ So we don't need to spend much.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'to spend much' completes the thought.

× I think it depends on the situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

No correction needed; the sentence is correct.

× Uh, actually I prefer comfortable shoes, but I, I believe it depends because, uh, like when they're wedding, I need some heels or something to complete my style.

✓ Actually, I prefer comfortable shoes, but I believe it depends because, like at weddings, I need some heels or something to complete my style.

'They're wedding' is incorrect; it should be 'at weddings'. Also, removing filler words improves clarity.

× So I believe it's the best, but for.

✓ So I believe that's the best choice for those occasions.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing it clarifies the meaning.