Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用，同时避免重复和语气词的过多使用。可以简洁明了地表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

Example: Yes, I like buying new shoes about three times a year because I need sports shoes to support my hobbies, such as badminton and tennis.

Suggestion: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如'invaluable'用法不当）和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇表达节省时间的优势，并注意句子结构的完整和连贯。

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes online because it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Instead of spending time traveling to the store, I can use that time to do other things I enjoy.

Suggestion: 回答中数字表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不够具体。建议明确表达花费金额，使用正确的名词和动词形式，并具体说明换鞋的原因。

Example: I usually spend about 15,000 N per year on shoes because I need to replace them regularly to protect my ankles and feet during sports.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，重复使用语气词，建议简洁明了地表达偏好并给出具体理由，注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

Example: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because their main function is to provide support and safety when I play sports or work.

× Yes, I like buy new shoes, uh, mostly 3 * a year umm, because I like buy the sport shoes to support my hobbies.

✓ Yes, I like buying new shoes, uh, mostly 3 times a year, umm, because I like buying sport shoes to support my hobbies.

动词like后面应接动名词形式buying，而不是动词原形buy。

× Yes, I would like buy shoes online because it is very invaluable and it is can save time.

✓ Yes, I would like to buy shoes online because it is very invaluable and it can save time.

would like后面应接不定式to buy，而不是动词原形buy。

× I needn't to spend my time on taking a bus or subway instead of I can use this time saved by online shopping to do anything I want in my.

✓ I don't need to spend my time taking a bus or subway; instead, I can use this time saved by online shopping to do anything I want.

情态动词needn't后不接to，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整句子。

× Maybe 15,000 uh N uh, a year. I think, uh, because this shoes is need to be support my sport, so I need usually, uh, exchange my shoes to protect my nickels and my feet.

✓ Maybe 15,000 uh N uh, a year. I think, uh, because these shoes need to support my sport, so I usually need to exchange my shoes to protect my ankles and my feet.

shoes为复数，需用these而非this；动词需与复数主语一致用need；nickels应为ankles。

× I need usually, uh, exchange my shoes to protect my nickels and my feet.

✓ I usually need to exchange my shoes to protect my ankles and my feet.

动词need后接不定式to exchange，且副词usually应放在助动词后。

× I need usually, uh, exchange my shoes to protect my nickels and my feet.

✓ I usually need to exchange my shoes to protect my ankles and my feet.

nickels拼写错误，应为ankles，指脚踝。

× I think, uh, absolutely it's comfortable shoes, uh, because just like I said before, uh, the shoes, the con, uh, function of shoes is so important for me because I need the shoes to support my safe when I play some sports and when I working with working in.

✓ I think, uh, absolutely it's comfortable shoes, uh, because just like I said before, uh, the function of shoes is so important for me because I need the shoes to support my safety when I play some sports and when I am working.

safe用作名词时应为safety；动词working前需加助动词am。

× when I working with working in.

✓ when I am working.

动词working前缺少助动词am，导致时态错误。