Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
No, I don't. I think shoes just tools to help you to walk and run and there's no need to pay a lot of money on it. And I think I'm a runner and I don't also think there's need to, but very expensive shoes because the shoes is just a tool.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
No, I haven't because I think the size of shoes are different between between every type of shoes and you have to try it on in the store and then you decide to buy it.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
Uh, I think it's exactly about 900 RMB is that the cost shoes conclude the suitable and comfortable and I think that's enough.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
I think the answer is both you know and this age you can pay a little bit of money to bought a shoes that modern and good look.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意冠词和单复数的使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体理由支持观点。
Example: No, I don't like buying shoes often. I think shoes are just tools for walking and running, so I don't see the need to spend a lot of money on them.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较为完整，但有重复词汇和语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意单复数和介词的正确使用。
Example: No, I haven't bought shoes online because sizes vary between different brands, so I prefer to try them on in the store before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议先直接给出数字，然后说明原因，句子要简洁明了。
Example: I usually spend about 900 RMB on shoes because I want them to be both suitable and comfortable.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答表达不够准确，时态和词汇使用有误。建议先明确表达偏好，然后用具体理由支持，注意时态和单复数形式。
Example: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because nowadays you can find shoes that look good and feel comfortable at the same time.
Grammar
× I think shoes just tools to help you to walk and run and there's no need to pay a lot of money on it.
✓ I think shoes are just tools to help you walk and run, and there's no need to pay a lot of money on them.
这里'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是省略了动词。'tools'也是复数，需与主语一致。'on it'应改为'on them'，因为'shoes'是复数。
× I think shoes just tools to help you to walk and run and there's no need to pay a lot of money on it.
✓ I think shoes are just tools to help you walk and run, and there's no need to pay a lot of money on them.
代词'it'指代单数，但'shoes'是复数，应该用复数代词'them'。
× And I think I'm a runner and I don't also think there's need to, but very expensive shoes because the shoes is just a tool.
✓ And I think I'm a runner, and I also don't think there's a need for very expensive shoes because shoes are just tools.
句中'and I don't also think'的词序不正确，应为'I also don't think'。此外，'there's need to'缺少冠词，应为'there's a need for'。'the shoes is'主谓不一致，复数名词应用复数动词'are'。
× And I think I'm a runner and I don't also think there's need to, but very expensive shoes because the shoes is just a tool.
✓ And I think I'm a runner, and I also don't think there's a need for very expensive shoes because shoes are just tools.
'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，'tool'应改为复数'tools'以保持一致。
× No, I haven't because I think the size of shoes are different between between every type of shoes and you have to try it on in the store and then you decide to buy it.
✓ No, I haven't because I think the sizes of shoes are different between every type of shoes, and you have to try them on in the store before you decide to buy them.
'size'应使用复数'sizes'，因为不同鞋子有不同尺码。'try it on'中的'it'应改为复数'them'，因为指的是鞋子复数。
× No, I haven't because I think the size of shoes are different between between every type of shoes and you have to try it on in the store and then you decide to buy it.
✓ No, I haven't because I think the sizes of shoes are different among every type of shoes, and you have to try them on in the store before you decide to buy them.
'between'通常用于两者之间，多个对象应使用'among'。
× Uh, I think it's exactly about 900 RMB is that the cost shoes conclude the suitable and comfortable and I think that's enough.
✓ Uh, I think it's exactly about 900 RMB, which is the cost of shoes that are suitable and comfortable, and I think that's enough.
'cost shoes'表达不正确，应为'the cost of shoes'。'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。
× Uh, I think it's exactly about 900 RMB is that the cost shoes conclude the suitable and comfortable and I think that's enough.
✓ Uh, I think it's exactly about 900 RMB, which is the cost of shoes that are suitable and comfortable, and I think that's enough.
句中'it'指代不明确，应使用'which'引导定语从句。
× I think the answer is both you know and this age you can pay a little bit of money to bought a shoes that modern and good look.
✓ I think the answer is both, you know, and nowadays you can pay a little bit of money to buy shoes that are modern and good-looking.
'a little bit of money'用法正确，但'bought'应为动词原形'buy'，因为前面有情态动词'can'。'a shoes'错误，'shoes'是复数，不用冠词'a'。'good look'应为形容词短语'good-looking'。
× I think the answer is both you know and this age you can pay a little bit of money to bought a shoes that modern and good look.
✓ I think the answer is both, you know, and nowadays you can pay a little bit of money to buy shoes that are modern and good-looking.
情态动词'can'后应接动词原形，'bought'是过去式，应改为'buy'。
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