Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
Seldom. I'm not a person who always wants the last one, So shoes only is comfortable and not broken. I wouldn't change it.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
Of course the boyfriend is so convenient today in China because we have Taobao and TikTok, but actually you need to careful because not all shoes are in good conditions. Maybe you receive it but this color isn't like the picture.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
Well, I may say quite little because all of my shoes are cheaper, maybe in CN¥200. I think this shoes are so comfortable and I don't need to spend too many too much money on it.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
Of course, comfortable shoes, because comfortable shoes can let you go everywhere you want. But those fashionable shoes, when you walking, you can know how tired you are.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且信息不够具体。建议用更自然的表达方式，注意语法和句子结构，增加具体细节。
Example: I don't buy shoes very often because I prefer to keep my current ones as long as they are comfortable and in good condition.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中出现了不相关词汇（boyfriend），表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议避免无关内容，使用正确的语法，并具体说明网购鞋子的优缺点。
Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online because platforms like Taobao and TikTok are very convenient. However, sometimes the shoes don't match the pictures or quality is not as expected, so you have to be careful.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 表达有语法错误，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的语法，表达更流畅，并具体说明为什么选择价格较低的鞋子。
Example: I usually spend around 200 yuan on shoes because I find affordable shoes that are comfortable enough for my daily use.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 表达较为清楚，但语法和用词仍有改进空间。建议使用更自然的表达方式，增加连接词，使回答更连贯。
Example: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they allow me to walk anywhere without pain. On the other hand, fashionable shoes often make my feet tired after a short time.
Grammar
× So shoes only is comfortable and not broken.
✓ So shoes only are comfortable and not broken.
这里的主语是复数名词“shoes”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“are”，而不是单数形式“is”。
× I wouldn't change it.
✓ I wouldn't change them.
“shoes”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而不是单数“it”。
× Of course the boyfriend is so convenient today in China because we have Taobao and TikTok, but actually you need to careful because not all shoes are in good conditions.
✓ Of course, buying online is so convenient today in China because we have Taobao and TikTok, but actually you need to be careful because not all shoes are in good condition.
原句中“the boyfriend”用词错误，应为“buying online”；“need to careful”缺少动词“be”；“conditions”应为不可数名词“condition”。
× Maybe you receive it but this color isn't like the picture.
✓ Maybe you receive them but this color isn't like the picture.
“shoes”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而不是单数“it”。
× Well, I may say quite little because all of my shoes are cheaper, maybe in CN¥200.
✓ Well, I may say quite little because all of my shoes are cheap, maybe around CN¥200.
“cheaper”是比较级，缺少比较对象，应改为形容词“cheap”；“in CN¥200”应改为“around CN¥200”表示大约的金额。
× I think this shoes are so comfortable and I don't need to spend too many too much money on it.
✓ I think these shoes are so comfortable and I don't need to spend too much money on them.
“this shoes”应为复数指示代词“these shoes”；“too many too much money”重复且错误，应为“too much money”；代词“it”应为复数“them”。
× But those fashionable shoes, when you walking, you can know how tired you are.
✓ But those fashionable shoes, when you are walking, you can know how tired you are.
“when you walking”缺少助动词“are”，应为“when you are walking”。
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