Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'quality is more important than quality' không hợp lý). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Example: I don't buy shoes very often, usually only once or twice a year. I prefer to replace them only when my old shoes are completely worn out because I value quality over quantity.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'learnt to more careful' nên là 'learned to be more careful'). Hãy chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online, especially from TikTok shops. Unfortunately, the experience was terrible because the shoes were of poor quality and did not match the pictures. Since then, I have learned to be more careful when shopping online.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'a smoke shoe' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I usually spend different amounts on shoes depending on the type. For example, sports shoes are usually more expensive than high heels or sandals.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: 'my my major had to work work more'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ lý do để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because my job requires me to be on my feet a lot, so comfort is very important to me.

× I tend to replace them when my own shoe are completely worn out because I think the quality is more important than quality.

✓ I tend to replace them when my own shoes are completely worn out because I think quality is more important than quantity.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to agree with the plural subject. Also, the phrase 'more important than quality' is unclear; it should be 'more important than quantity' to make sense. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and clarifies meaning.

× I have bought shoes online before especially from Tiktok shops and honestly it was terrible experience because the shoes were very poor quality and did not match the picture.

✓ I have bought shoes online before, especially from TikTok shops, and honestly it was a terrible experience because the shoes were of very poor quality and did not match the picture.

The sentence is mostly correct in tense, but missing the article 'a' before 'terrible experience' and the preposition 'of' before 'very poor quality'. Adding these improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I learnt to more careful when shopping online after that.

✓ I learnt to be more careful when shopping online after that.

The verb 'learnt' should be followed by 'to be' before the adjective 'more careful'. Omitting 'to be' is incorrect. This is a modal verb usage issue where the infinitive form is required.

× Well, I don't know exactly number because it depends on kind of shoe that I want to buy because a smoke shoe is more quite more expensive than high heel or sandal.

✓ Well, I don't know the exact number because it depends on the kind of shoe that I want to buy, because a sneaker is quite more expensive than high heels or sandals.

The phrase 'exactly number' should be 'the exact number' (article and adjective order). 'Kind of shoe' needs 'the' before it. 'Smoke shoe' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sneaker'. 'High heel' and 'sandal' should be plural to match the comparison. Also, 'quite more expensive' is awkward; 'quite a bit more expensive' or 'more expensive' is better. This addresses quantifier and article usage.

× Well, I prefer comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes because my my major had to work work more, so the comfortable one can help me do feel convenient.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes because my major requires me to work more, so comfortable ones help me feel comfortable.

The phrase 'prefer comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes' should be 'prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes' (correct preposition). 'My my major had to work work more' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'my major requires me to work more'. 'The comfortable one can help me do feel convenient' is awkward; better is 'comfortable ones help me feel comfortable'. This corrects conjunction use and improves sentence clarity.