Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es clara pero contiene errores gramaticales y algunas repeticiones que afectan la naturalidad. Intenta usar oraciones más cortas y evita muletillas como "uh". Además, mejora la estructura gramatical para que sea más fluida y natural.

Example: I don't enjoy buying shoes or clothes because it takes a lot of time and can be stressful. Usually, I buy shoes once or twice a year when my current pair is worn out. When I need new shoes, I go to the store quickly.

Suggestion: Hay errores en la construcción de las oraciones y algunas frases no son claras. Evita repeticiones y mejora la coherencia usando conectores adecuados. Además, cuida la pronunciación y la precisión al hablar de experiencias pasadas.

Example: Yes, I often buy shoes online. At first, it was difficult because I wasn't sure about the size, style, or brand. However, now it's very convenient and fast. Also, I can get discounts which makes it even better.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta tiene errores gramaticales y falta claridad en algunas partes. Por ejemplo, "my parents are pretty durable" no tiene sentido en este contexto. Revisa la gramática y usa vocabulario adecuado para expresar tus ideas con precisión.

Example: I usually spend more money on shoes than most people because I prefer expensive but durable pairs that suit me well. In the long term, I think I save money because these shoes last a long time.

Suggestion: La respuesta es comprensible pero contiene errores gramaticales y repeticiones. Intenta estructurar mejor las oraciones y evitar redundancias para que tu respuesta sea más natural y clara.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time at home exercising or working. For example, sneakers provide the comfort and support I need.

× Uh, usually I only buy shoes uh once or twice a year when my current pair falling into pieces.

✓ Uh, usually I only buy shoes uh once or twice a year when my current pair is falling to pieces.

The phrase 'my current pair falling into pieces' lacks the verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'my current pair is falling to pieces' to indicate an ongoing action.

× When I need a new pair I go to the shop quick.

✓ When I need a new pair, I go to the shop quickly.

The adverb 'quick' is incorrectly used; it should be 'quickly' to modify the verb 'go'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× Yes, I buy you online shoes quite often.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online quite often.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used and unnecessary here. The correct sentence omits 'you' to make sense.

× Also I can get some discount which which get better this the.

✓ Also, I can get some discounts which have gotten better recently.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey that discounts have improved recently. Added commas and corrected word order.

× I spend more money in shoes than most people because I try to choose an expensive but durable pair of shoes that suit me best.

✓ I spend more money on shoes than most people because I try to choose an expensive but durable pair of shoes that suits me best.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; it should be 'on' when talking about spending money. Also, 'pair' is singular, so the verb should be 'suits'.

× However, in the long term, I think I save money because my parents are pretty durable over the time.

✓ However, in the long term, I think I save money because my pairs are pretty durable over time.

The word 'parents' is incorrect; it should be 'pairs' referring to shoes. Also, 'over the time' should be 'over time'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I spent a lot of time at home doing exercise or working, so I just need to feel relaxed and support and the use of sneakers for example, give me that that sensation so.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time at home exercising or working, so I just need to feel relaxed and supported, and the use of sneakers, for example, gives me that sensation.

The verb 'spent' should be present tense 'spend' to match the habitual action. 'Doing exercise' is better as 'exercising'. 'Support' should be 'supported' (adjective). The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.