Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, correct grammatical errors such as 'I usually buy it once at four months' to 'I usually buy shoes once every four months.' Use more precise vocabulary and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. I usually purchase a new pair once every four months. Sometimes, if the shoes are of good quality, they can last for weeks without needing replacement.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I have bought shoes online, but I didn't like it because the size was a bit small.' Also, avoid redundancy like 'return them back' (just 'return them'). Add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I didn't like the experience because the size was a bit small for me. As a result, I had to return them, but unfortunately, I did not receive a refund.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and clarify your meaning. For example, explain what 'health' shoes mean or use a better term. Use linking words to connect ideas, such as 'However' or 'Moreover.' Also, specify the currency to avoid confusion.

Example: If I buy sneakers, I usually spend about 35,000 units of my local currency per year. However, for more specialized shoes, like those for health or sports, I tend to spend more. The price also depends on the shop and the quality of the shoes.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'it can sometimes be complicated' instead of 'it's sometimes can be.' Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas. Also, avoid plural errors like 'shops' should be 'shop' or 'shops that sell.'

Example: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. However, it can sometimes be complicated to find both qualities in one pair. Fortunately, if you know a specific shop that sells good shoes, it becomes easier to find them.

× Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy it often.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I usually buy it once at four months.

✓ I usually buy them once every four months.

The phrase 'once at four months' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'once every four months' to indicate frequency. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to match the plural noun 'shoes'.

× sometimes it could be uh, even for whole week if uh, the shoes is was good quality.

✓ sometimes it could be even for a whole week if the shoes are good quality.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' or 'was'. Also, 'for whole week' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I had experience buying shoes online but I didn't like it because the size uh, was a bit small for me and uh, I had to return them back but I didn't get the refund back.

✓ Yes, I have experience buying shoes online but I didn't like it because the size was a bit small for me and I had to return them but I didn't get a refund.

The phrase 'I had experience' should be 'I have experience' to indicate present perfect tense. Also, 'return them back' and 'get the refund back' are redundant; 'return them' and 'get a refund' are correct.

× If it's sneakers I usually uh spend money about 35,000 a year.

✓ If it's sneakers, I usually spend about 35,000 a year.

The phrase 'spend money about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend about' when referring to an amount of money.

× But uh if it's health umm I can spend more.

✓ But if it's heels, I can spend more.

The word 'health' is incorrect in context; likely the intended word is 'heels', a type of shoe. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correction is necessary for clarity.

× But it also depends on the shop and quality though.

✓ But it also depends on the shop and the quality though.

The noun 'quality' needs the definite article 'the' to specify it properly in this context.

× Of course it's sometimes can be complicated to find both qualities in one pair of shoes, but if you know a specific shops that sells these good shoes, it is easy.

✓ Of course, it can sometimes be complicated to find both qualities in one pair of shoes, but if you know specific shops that sell these good shoes, it is easy.

The phrase 'it's sometimes can be' is incorrect; correct order is 'it can sometimes be'. Also, 'a specific shops' is incorrect because 'shops' is plural; it should be 'specific shops'. The verb 'sells' should be 'sell' to agree with plural subject 'shops'.