Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
Yes, I adore purchasing shoes from time to time as buying new shoes is really exciting for me and I I can uh, wear the new shoes and it makes me feel really comfortable.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
To be honest, I've never bought shoes on the Internet because it's complicated to recognize the shoe size. I don't know if the shoes fits me, so I didn't buy it.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
For me, I occasionally spend more than ¥10,000 for shoes. It's not reasonable price but I don't want to umm purchase that reasonable shoes because I would like to utilize the shoes longer time.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
I would rather choose comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes because I utilize the shoes everyday so I would like to select a umm comfortable and uh it's easy to wear so I would love.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、"I I can uh"のような繰り返しやためらいの表現を減らし、より簡潔で明確な文にすると良いでしょう。また、具体的な頻度を示すとより効果的です。
Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes occasionally because getting new shoes excites me and they make me feel comfortable.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 理由を述べる際に、"it's complicated to recognize the shoe size"の表現をより自然な英語に改善し、文法的な誤り（"shoes fits"→"shoes fit"）を直すと良いです。
Example: To be honest, I've never bought shoes online because it's difficult to know if the size will fit me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。"It's not reasonable price"は"It's not a reasonable price"に、"utilize the shoes longer time"は"use the shoes for a longer time"に直しましょう。また、"reasonable shoes"の意味が曖昧なので、より具体的に説明すると良いです。
Example: I sometimes spend more than ¥10,000 on shoes because I want to buy high-quality ones that last a long time.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 文が途中で終わっているように感じられ、意味が不明瞭です。"utilize"より"use"の方が自然です。文を完結させ、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。
Example: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I wear them every day and I want shoes that are easy to put on and feel good.
Grammar
× Yes, I adore purchasing shoes from time to time as buying new shoes is really exciting for me and I I can uh, wear the new shoes and it makes me feel really comfortable.
✓ Yes, I adore purchasing shoes from time to time as buying new shoes is really exciting for me and I can, uh, wear the new shoes and it makes me feel really comfortable.
The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed to maintain sentence clarity and correctness.
× I don't know if the shoes fits me, so I didn't buy it.
✓ I don't know if the shoes fit me, so I didn't buy them.
The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'fit' (not 'fits'). Also, 'shoes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.
× It's not reasonable price but I don't want to umm purchase that reasonable shoes because I would like to utilize the shoes longer time.
✓ It's not a reasonable price but I don't want to, umm, purchase those reasonable shoes because I would like to use the shoes for a longer time.
The phrase 'reasonable price' needs the article 'a'. 'That' should be 'those' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Utilize' is better replaced with 'use' for naturalness, and 'longer time' should be 'for a longer time'.
× I would rather choose comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes because I utilize the shoes everyday so I would like to select a umm comfortable and uh it's easy to wear so I would love.
✓ I would rather choose comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes because I use the shoes every day, so I would like to select comfortable ones that are easy to wear, so I would love them.
The word 'everyday' is an adjective; the correct adverb is 'every day'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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