Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes because they complement my casual outfits. I usually buy new shoes once a year since I prefer quality over quantity.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words. Also, be specific about why online shopping is convenient.

Example: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and offers a wide variety. For example, websites like Myntra and Amazon allow me to compare prices and find good discounts.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and structured. Begin with a clear statement, then explain your budget with specific reasons. Avoid hesitation and filler words.

Example: I usually spend around ₹1000 on shoes because I like to manage my budget carefully. This amount allows me to buy decent quality shoes without overspending.

Suggestion: Your answer should be grammatically correct and more coherent. Start with a clear preference, then explain your reasons with linking words. Avoid mixing singular and plural forms incorrectly.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help reduce foot pain. Since I travel a lot on foot, comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× How often is I allowed to buy a different type of shoes?

✓ How often am I allowed to buy different types of shoes?

The pronoun 'I' requires the verb form 'am' instead of 'is'. Also, 'a different type of shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'different types of shoes' or 'a different type of shoe'.

× How often is I allowed to buy a different type of shoes?

✓ How often am I allowed to buy different types of shoes?

The phrase 'a different type of shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'different types of shoes' or 'a different type of shoe'.

× I oftenly buy it in yearly.

✓ I often buy them yearly.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'in yearly' is incorrect; 'yearly' can be used alone as an adverb. Additionally, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' (plural).

× I usually shop from the popular uh website, Myntra, me show, Flipkart, Amazon, etcetera.

✓ I usually shop from popular websites like Myntra, Meesho, Flipkart, Amazon, etc.

The phrase 'me show' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'Meesho'. Also, 'the popular uh website' should be plural 'popular websites' because multiple sites are listed. 'From' is correct here, but the sentence is improved by listing the websites properly.

× And which is a good option to compare with so many shoes and uh we can also uh get it from offer.

✓ It is a good option to compare many shoes, and we can also get them on offer.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Which' is incorrectly used; it should be 'It'. 'Compare with so many shoes' is awkward; better to say 'compare many shoes'. 'Get it from offer' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get them on offer'.

× Actually, I am not a person that spend lot of money for buying uh, clothes or shoes items, uh, thus, umm, I prefer to buy shoes in the range of ₹1000 uh, it's helped me to uh, calculate my budget.

✓ Actually, I am not a person who spends a lot of money on buying clothes or shoes; thus, I prefer to buy shoes in the range of ₹1000. It helps me to calculate my budget.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who' when referring to a person. The verb 'spend' should be 'spends' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. 'Lot of money' should be 'a lot of money'. 'For buying' is better expressed as 'on buying'. 'It's helped me' should be 'It helps me' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I always prefer to use a comfortable shoes because it's help me to reduce our foot pains and I am a traveler so I'm lot of the time I used to travel by foot so.

✓ I always prefer to use comfortable shoes because they help me reduce foot pain. I am a traveler, so I often travel by foot.

'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. 'It's help me' should be 'they help me' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Our foot pains' is incorrect; it should be 'foot pain' referring to the speaker. 'I'm lot of the time I used to travel by foot so' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'I often travel by foot.'