Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'different varieties' and improve fluency by combining ideas smoothly. Also, specify the frequency more naturally.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair once a year.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your reasons.

Example: No, I prefer buying shoes in stores because online sizes often don't fit well, so I like to try them on before purchasing.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by using smoother phrasing and linking words. Also, clarify the currency for better understanding.

Example: It depends on the type of shoes; for office wear, I usually spend around 5000 rupees, while for casual shoes, I spend about 3000 rupees.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Try to express your preference clearly and concisely.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I wear them all day, so comfort is more important to me.

× I often purchase once in a year.

✓ I often purchase once a year.

The phrase 'once in a year' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'once a year' to indicate frequency. 'Once a year' is the standard way to express something happening one time per year.

× Most of the times whatever size they mentioned in the online won't fit properly.

✓ Most of the time, whatever size they mention online won't fit properly.

The phrase 'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. Also, 'mentioned in the online' is incorrect; it should be 'mention online' because 'online' is an adverb here, and the present tense 'mention' fits better to express a general truth.

× So I go in person so that I can buy it directly from the retail stores.

✓ So I go in person so that I can buy them directly from retail stores.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural; it should be 'them'. Also, 'the retail stores' is better as 'retail stores' here because we are speaking generally, not about specific stores.

× If it is for office purpose I prefer to buy at a range of 5000 and if it is for casual use I will purchase within 3000.

✓ If it is for office purposes, I prefer to buy in the range of 5000, and if it is for casual use, I will purchase within 3000.

The phrase 'for office purpose' should be 'for office purposes' (plural). The preposition 'at a range of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the range of'. Also, commas are needed after introductory clauses for clarity.

× So rather than going for fashionable footwear, the best option would be being comfortable.

✓ So rather than going for fashionable footwear, the best option would be to be comfortable.

The phrase 'would be being comfortable' is awkward and incorrect. The correct infinitive form 'to be comfortable' should be used after 'would be' to express preference or choice.