Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors such as verb forms and article usage.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially for special occasions like birthday parties and anniversaries. For example, last week I bought a pair of black Nike shoes for work.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and concise sentences, avoid filler words, and use correct grammar. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually avoid buying shoes online because I am concerned about the quality. For instance, last year I bought a pair online, but they were too small and of poor quality.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar, avoid incomplete sentences, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be more specific and concise in your explanation.

Example: I usually spend around $150 to $200 on shoes each year, depending on the situation. For example, last week I had to buy a new pair of comfortable Nike shoes because my old ones were damaged.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence and naturalness.

Example: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, depending on the situation. For special occasions like birthday parties or anniversaries, I choose fashionable shoes. However, for work, I prioritize comfort so I can perform my tasks easily.

× I also buying shoes for my work.

✓ I also buy shoes for my work.

The verb 'buying' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'buy' to match the present simple tense used in the sentence.

× I bought shoes Nike shoes, uh, it is in black colour.

✓ I bought Nike shoes, and they are black in colour.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it' to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I don't have any interest, interest in quality, uh, products.

✓ I don't have any interest in quality products.

The phrase 'interest in' is correct, but the repetition of 'interest' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the repeated word improves clarity and correctness.

× it was a too small in size.

✓ it was too small in size.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'too small'. 'Too' is an adverb modifying 'small' and does not require an article before it.

× But it's depend on situation.

✓ But it depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'situation' to specify it.

× If I need to buy for my for any occasions or for my work then I need to buy it.

✓ If I need to buy for any occasion or for my work, then I need to buy it.

The plural 'occasions' should be singular 'occasion' to match the singular context. Also, the phrase 'my for any occasions' is incorrect and should be 'for any occasion'.

× I my shoes was damaged so I need to buy it.

✓ My shoes were damaged, so I needed to buy them.

The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'shoes'. Also, 'I need' should be past tense 'I needed' to maintain past tense consistency. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'.

× So I buy Nike shoes.

✓ So I bought Nike shoes.

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to maintain consistency with the previous past tense context.

× It's very comfortable and.

✓ They are very comfortable.

The pronoun 'It' is incorrect for plural 'shoes'; 'They' should be used. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be completed properly.

× If I go any special occasions like birthday party, anniversary then I wear fashionable shoes.

✓ If I go to any special occasions like birthday parties or anniversaries, then I wear fashionable shoes.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'go' when referring to events. Also, plural forms 'parties' and 'anniversaries' are appropriate here.

× On the other hand if I go my work then I wear comfortable shoes so I can do my work very easily.

✓ On the other hand, if I go to work, then I wear comfortable shoes so I can do my work very easily.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'go' when referring to 'work'. Also, a comma is added after 'On the other hand' for clarity.