Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on clarity, grammar, and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms, singular/plural nouns, and precise vocabulary (e.g. "shoes and clothes", "buy them once a month", "handed down by my mum"). Keep to 1–3 short sentences to avoid redundancy.

Example: No, I don't enjoy buying shoes very much. I usually buy shoes and clothes about once a month, and most of my clothes are handed down by my mum, so I don't shop often.

Suggestion: Use the correct tense and name websites clearly or say "online" generally. Give a concise answer with a short example or frequency. Avoid unclear numbers or phrases. Link ideas with a simple connector like "and" or "also".

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online. For example, I once ordered a pair from an online store, and I often buy clothes and shoes from various websites.

Suggestion: Give a clear amount and explain briefly why. Use appropriate currency terms (e.g. "about 100,000 won/dong/dollars") and correct grammar. Keep it to one or two sentences and use a linking phrase for reason like "because" or "so".

Example: I usually spend about 100,000 won on shoes because I prefer not to spend much on clothes and try to buy only what I need.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific reasons with clear linking words. Use correct expressions (e.g. "I'm not a fashionable person", "I choose shoes for durability and comfort"). Provide 1–2 specific criteria such as "comfort, durability, and suitability for work".

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm not very fashion-conscious. I choose shoes based on comfort, how long they will last, and whether they suit my daily activities.

× I don't like buying a shoes or clothes, I'm just buying my nucleus per a month.

✓ I don't like buying shoes or clothes; I just buy new ones once a month.

The sentence uses the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'shoes' (article error, ID 22) and the noun 'nucleus' is incorrect in context. Also verb form and frequency expression were awkward. Correct by removing the article before the plural noun, replacing 'nucleus' with 'new ones' to refer to shoes/clothes, changing 'I'm just buying' to simple present 'I just buy' for habitual action, and 'per a month' to 'once a month'.

× I'm usually wearing the clothes which is my mum bite for me.

✓ I usually wear the clothes that my mum buys for me.

The sentence contained incorrect verb form and pronoun usage. 'Which' can be used but 'that' is more natural for defining clauses (ID 12). 'Is' with plural 'clothes' is wrong (subject-verb agreement, ID 27), and 'bite' is a wrong verb; should be 'buys'. Also use simple present 'wear' for habitual actions (ID 6).

× Yes I have been bought the shoes online like on upper mucinsa were 4901.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online, for example on Coupang where they cost 49,000 won.

The original used the present perfect continuous structure 'have been bought' incorrectly (should be present perfect 'have bought' to mean 'I have purchased' — problem ID 9). Also the platform name and price were garbled; corrected to a plausible example. Use 'have bought' for completed experiences.

× Also I often buy a close by online.

✓ Also, I often buy clothes online.

'a close' is incorrect: 'close' is misspelling of 'clothes' and the article 'a' should not be used with the uncountable/ plural noun 'clothes' (article error, ID 22). Use plural 'clothes' without 'a'.

× I spend my money near to. A 100,000 because I do not usually enjoy spending my money to clothes.

✓ I spend about 100,000 won because I don't usually enjoy spending money on clothes.

'Near to. A 100,000' is ungrammatical; use 'about 100,000 won' to express approximate amount (ID 20). 'Spend money to clothes' uses incorrect preposition; correct is 'on clothes' (ID 11). Also contracted 'do not' to 'don't' is acceptable; maintain simple present 'spend' for habitual action (ID 6).

× I prefer the comfortable shoes 'cause I am not a fashionable people.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I am not a fashionable person.

'The comfortable shoes' uses unnecessary definite article; general preference uses plural without 'the' (article error, ID 22). 'A fashionable people' is wrong: 'people' is plural; use 'person' with 'a' (pronoun/noun form error, ID 12). Also replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'.

× I just select the clothes by the condition or how long it can be, where and the convenience.

✓ I just choose clothes based on their condition, how long they will last, where I will wear them, and how convenient they are.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear references (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Select' is okay but 'choose' is more natural; use 'based on' for criteria, 'how long it can be' should be 'how long they will last' (verb phrase and reference error), and list items need parallel structure and clear pronouns 'they/them'.