Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn; tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất và lý do. Sử dụng liên từ nhẹ để mạch lạc (ví dụ: because, so, and).

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I only buy new ones about every six months because I wait until my old shoes are worn out. For example, I replace my running shoes twice a year since I use them a lot for exercise.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp và tránh từ dư thừa. Không dùng 'ever' sau 'have' trong câu khẳng định như này; hãy nói rõ lý do và thêm ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng linking words để nối ý (for example, so, which).

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient and allows me to compare prices across many stores. For example, I recently found a pair of trainers that were 30% cheaper online than in local shops.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về con số và cấu trúc câu; tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'Vietnam officials'. Nên nêu khoảng tiền rõ ràng, mục đích mua và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ để giải thích (because, so).

Example: I usually spend about 500,000 to 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair because I prioritise comfort and durability for sports and outdoor activities. For instance, I buy more expensive trainers for running to avoid injuries.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc: chọn một ưu tiên rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể, tránh nói lặp và lỗi phát âm/ ngữ pháp. Dùng cấu trúc đơn giản để nêu lý do và một điều kiện tương lai (if/when).

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because durability and affordability matter more to me. Maybe in the future, when I have more money, I will buy trendier shoes for special occasions.

× I'm really into buying shoes, but I rarely often buy shoes.

✓ I'm really into buying shoes, but I rarely buy them.

The original contains two conflicting frequency adverbs 'rarely' and 'often' together; use only one. Also replace the repeated noun 'shoes' with the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Use adverb 'rarely' before the base verb 'buy'. (Grammar problem type ID:20)

× It's about every every six months.

✓ It's about every six months.

The word 'every' is repeated; remove the duplicate. The phrase 'every six months' is the correct expression to indicate frequency. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× I only buy and get only a new pair when my shoe, my old shoes are worn out.

✓ I only buy a new pair when my old shoes are worn out.

Remove the duplicated 'only' and the mixed singular/plural 'my shoe, my old shoes' — use the plural consistently 'my old shoes'. Use the phrase 'buy a new pair' rather than 'buy and get'. (Grammar problem type ID:1)

× Uh yes, I have ever bought shoes online because I feel it's quite convenient because I I can compare prices in many shops and and soda I can choose my my shoes with affordable prices.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online because I feel it's quite convenient: I can compare prices in many shops and choose shoes at affordable prices.

In present perfect questions/statements, 'ever' is used in questions/negative contexts; remove 'ever' here. Remove repeated words 'because I I', 'and and', 'my my', and 'soda' (likely mistaken). Use 'choose shoes at affordable prices' rather than 'choose my shoes with affordable prices'. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× I usually spend about 5000 to on million Vietnam officials because I want my shoes in comfort and have a durability because they're important for playing sport and play outdoors activities.

✓ I usually spend about five hundred thousand to one million Vietnamese dong because I want comfortable and durable shoes, since they're important for playing sports and outdoor activities.

The numeric expression was unclear; express currency correctly as 'five hundred thousand to one million Vietnamese dong'. Use adjectives 'comfortable and durable' instead of awkward phrasing. Use plural 'sports' and 'outdoor activities'. (Grammar problem type ID:13)

× I prefer comfortable suites, pivotal fashionable ones because I want my shoes it's a half a in durability and enough affordable price and and maybe in the future I will buy more fashionable shoes when I have more money because I am I am a student now.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I want shoes that are durable and reasonably priced. Maybe in the future I will buy more fashionable shoes when I have more money because I am a student now.

Replace 'suites' with 'shoes' and 'pivotal' is incorrect here. Use the comparative structure 'prefer X to Y'. Fix awkward phrase 'it's a half a in durability and enough affordable price' to 'that are durable and reasonably priced'. Remove duplicate 'and' and repeated 'I am'. (Grammar problem type ID:26)