Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, use correct grammar and keep it concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying how often you buy shoes, then add one specific reason and an example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") correctly and avoid repetition.

Example: I don't buy shoes very often; I usually only replace them when my old pair is worn out. For example, I buy a new pair about once every two years because my shoes become uncomfortable or damaged.

Suggestion: Answer directly and expand with one clear supporting detail using correct tense and vocabulary. Mention how many times, what went well or badly, and finish the sentence. Use linking words like "because" and correct words (e.g., "fit my feet").

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times. Overall the experience was fine because although I worried they wouldn't fit my feet, they turned out to be comfortable and matched the photos.

Suggestion: Give a clear price range and correct currency terms, and add a brief reason for the variation. Use consistent numbers and correct plural/singular forms, and one linking word to show contrast (e.g., "however").

Example: I usually spend between 100 and 1,000 baht on most shoes, depending on the brand and quality. However, for sports shoes I sometimes spend up to 2,000 baht because I need better support and durability.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference, then explain why with a specific reason and a brief condition using a linking word (e.g., "but", "if"). Correct plural forms and use natural expressions like "doesn't hurt my feet".

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them every day without pain. But if a comfortable pair is also fashionable, that would be ideal since I like to look good while staying comfortable.

× I'm not kind of a person to buying shoe regularly.

✓ I'm not the kind of person to buy shoes regularly.

Uses wrong pronoun/article and verb form. 'kind of a person' requires 'the kind of person'. After 'to' use base verb 'buy' not 'buying'. 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' for general statement. Suggestion: use 'I'm not the kind of person to buy shoes regularly.'

× I'd always buy the shoe when is cannot use, so I buy it for repairs.

✓ I only buy shoes when the old ones cannot be used, so I buy them to replace them.

Sentence uses incorrect quantifiers and pronouns. 'I'd always' is wrong context; use 'I only' to show frequency. 'the shoe' should be plural 'shoes' or 'the old ones'. 'when is cannot use' is ungrammatical; correct form 'when they cannot be used' or 'when they are worn out'. 'so I buy it for repairs' is wrong pronoun and purpose; likely means 'to replace them'. Suggestion: clarify meaning and use plural pronouns consistently.

× The old, the old one.

✓ The old ones.

Repetition and incorrect singular form. If referring to previous shoes, use plural 'ones'. Suggestion: use 'the old ones' to refer to previous shoes.

× Yes I did. I bought the shoe online couple times.

✓ Yes, I did. I bought shoes online a couple of times.

Missing article and plural. 'the shoe' should be 'shoes' for general purchases. Also add 'a' in 'a couple of times'. Maintain past tense 'bought' is correct. Suggestion: 'I bought shoes online a couple of times.'

× The result is acceptable because at first I think it's not might be fit in my food but turn out is fit so I.

✓ The result was acceptable because at first I thought they might not fit my foot, but they turned out to fit.

Multiple errors: tense inconsistency, wrong modal placement, wrong nouns. Change present to past 'was' and 'thought'. 'not might be fit' should be 'might not fit'. 'my food' is wrong word; should be 'my foot'. 'turn out is fit so I' is ungrammatical; correct 'they turned out to fit.' Suggestion: keep past tense and correct modal placement: 'thought they might not fit my foot, but they turned out to fit.' },{