Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer direct and coherent. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes, then add one or two specific reasons and how often you buy them. Avoid filler words (um, uh) and unclear phrases. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually shop for them a few times a year because I like to update my wardrobe for family events and special occasions.

Suggestion: Provide a complete and natural sentence with a brief supporting detail. Use present perfect or present simple correctly and add a reason or example to make your answer more informative. Use linking words like "because" or "so" if you explain why.

Example: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and there is a wider selection. For example, I order sneakers from overseas stores when I can't find them locally.

Suggestion: Be precise and use correct number formats and currency. Start with a clear topic sentence stating a typical amount, then add context (per pair, per year, or currency). Avoid confusing or incorrect figures. If you are unsure, give an approximate range and specify the currency.

Example: I usually spend about 500,000 to 700,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes, which is roughly 20 to 30 US dollars.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference, then explain why using correct grammar and more specific details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and avoid grammatical errors (e.g., "it looks me" should be "they make me look"). Consider mentioning occasions when you choose fashionable over comfortable shoes.

Example: I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me look stylish for social events. However, I sometimes choose comfortable shoes when I know I'll be walking a lot.

× I have fun buying the shoes, especially because, umm, when the relatives, uh programs and betting.

✓ I enjoy buying shoes, especially when I go shopping with relatives for events and parties.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear (sentence structure error). It contains filler words and a list that does not form a coherent phrase. I replaced 'have fun buying the shoes' with 'enjoy buying shoes' for natural phrasing, removed unnecessary article 'the', clarified 'when the relatives' to 'when I go shopping with relatives', and interpreted 'programs and betting' as likely meaning events and parties. Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, avoid filler words, and use a clear subject-verb-complement structure.

× Yes, I always bought shoes online.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes online.

Uses past tense 'bought' while 'always' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present simple 'buy'. Change maintains the present habitual meaning. Suggestion: use present simple with adverbs of frequency (always, usually) for regular actions.

× I usually spend money on the shoes 500,000 to 7000.

✓ I usually spend between 5,000 and 7,000 on shoes.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear numbers (likely reversed or missing separators). This is a sentence structure error and numeric format issue. I reordered to 'spend between X and Y on shoes' and used a consistent numeric format. Suggestion: place 'between...and...' around the range and put the object 'on shoes' after the amount.

× I prefer fashionable shoes because it looks me very beautiful and stylish.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me look very beautiful and stylish.

Original uses incorrect pronoun 'it' and incorrect verb construction 'looks me'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb structure. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'shoes' and the causative structure 'make me look' to express effect. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and use 'make/let/help + object + base verb' when describing how something affects appearance.