Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes, then give frequency using correct time expressions, and a brief reason with one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g. “lens”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about two or three times a year because I like to update my wardrobe. I prefer boots in winter because they are warm and stylish, so I wear them often during the cold months.

Suggestion: Give a clear response and a short, specific explanation of the problem. Use correct past tense and link ideas with words like “however” or “so.” Avoid vague phrases like “after late” and unnecessary fillers such as “uh.” End with a concluding sentence about what you learned or what you will do next time.

Example: Yes, I bought shoes online once, but it was not a good experience because the size did not fit me. As a result, I returned them and now I always check the sizing chart and read reviews before buying online.

Suggestion: Give a precise amount and explain your spending habit clearly. Start with a topic sentence stating the usual cost, then give a reason why you spend that much. Use correct grammar for amounts (currency) and avoid repetition. Provide one concrete example of a brand or price range.

Example: I usually spend around $100 on a pair of shoes because I prefer high-quality, branded footwear. For example, I often buy from Nike or Adidas because their shoes last longer and are more comfortable for daily use.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Use comparative structures correctly and avoid grammatical errors. Connect sentences with “because” or “for example.” Mention a brand as an example and explain why it suits you.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I value foot support and all-day comfort. For example, I often choose Puma because their shoes fit well and have good cushioning, which makes them better for walking than many other brands.

× Yes, I like to buy shoes and I buy lens about 5 * a week a year and I prefer to buy the boots because it's suitable for the winter and it's more stylish and I like to wear it for in winter.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes and I buy them about five times a week; I prefer to buy boots because they are suitable for winter, they are more stylish, and I like to wear them in winter.

Multiple errors: 'like to buy' is acceptable but 'like buying' is more natural with general preferences (verb + -ing). 'lens' is incorrect pronoun/word choice; replace with 'them' and use 'five times' for frequency. 'the boots' should be 'boots' and use plural agreement: 'they are suitable' and 'they are more stylish'. Remove extra preposition 'for in winter' and use 'in winter'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'like' for habits, use correct plural pronouns and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct preposition 'in'.

× Yes, I I bought shoes once online, but it's not a good experience for me because the size is not for me.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online once, but it was not a good experience for me because the size did not fit me.

'bought' is past tense which is correct, but following verbs and verb forms must match. Use 'it was' not 'it's' (mixing present with past). 'the size is not for me' is unnatural; use 'did not fit me' to describe incorrect size in past. Suggestions: keep tense consistent in the sentence and use correct verbs for fit.

× After late I decide to buy the shoes Uh and more in our life.

✓ After that, I decided not to buy shoes online again.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'After late' is wrong; likely meant 'after that' or 'later'. 'I decide' should be past 'I decided' to match earlier past events. 'buy the shoes Uh and more in our life' is incoherent; interpret as deciding not to repeat online purchases. Suggestions: keep clear temporal connectors ('after that', 'later') and maintain consistent tense.

× Know about us say 1000 and I only buy shoes in a high brand because I I will choose the best.

✓ I usually spend about 1000, and I only buy shoes from high-end brands because I choose the best.

'Know about us say 1000' is garbled; interpret as 'I usually spend about 1000'. Use 'from' with 'brands' and 'high-end' as adjective. Remove duplicated 'I'. Use simple present for habitual action 'I choose the best'. Suggestions: use clear adverbials ('usually'), correct preposition 'from', and avoid duplication.

× I think the shoes is important for me so I always choose the high quality.

✓ I think shoes are important to me, so I always choose high-quality ones.

'shoes' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'important for me' is better phrased 'important to me'. 'the high quality' should be 'high-quality ones' to refer to shoes. Suggestions: match verb number to subject, use 'important to', and use hyphenated adjective 'high-quality' with a pronoun 'ones'.

× Prefer to comfortable shoes because I care about uncomfortable from to me.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I cannot stand uncomfortable ones.

Missing subject 'I' and wrong structure 'prefer to comfortable' should be 'prefer comfortable'. 'I care about uncomfortable from to me' is ungrammatical; express the idea as 'I cannot stand uncomfortable ones' or 'I mind uncomfortable shoes'. Suggestions: include subject, use correct verb patterns ('prefer' + adjective/noun), and use 'ones' to refer back to shoes.

× For example, I like to wear Puma because he's comfortable shoes than other brand price for me.

✓ For example, I like to wear Puma because its shoes are more comfortable than those of other brands and the price suits me.

Incorrect pronoun 'he's' should be 'its' for a brand. Sentence needs comparative structure: 'are more comfortable than those of other brands'. 'price for me' is unclear; change to 'the price suits me'. Suggestions: use correct possessive pronoun for brands ('its'), form comparisons properly, and clarify price remark.