Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
Uh, now I, I now I really like buying shoes because why buying shoes? Uh, I felt very, very excited and relieved. But now I seldom buy a shoes because I have too many shoes, so it is unnecessary for me to buy shoes.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
Yes, I had ball shoes online and I use it from the official app to buy it uh, because it is very convenient and and the price is so cheap. Uh, the most important is in that the maybe the shoe only for sales online and it would don't have at the offline store.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
Well, I just usually for CN¥700 for the shoes because because the the price must be reasonable and meanwhile I don't need to buy I I don't want to buy more shoes, big shoes just want enough. So I would like to call such such money on shoes.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
I think I prefer comfortable shoes because because I need to consider about the shoes is about the comfortability, comfortable comfortability and because although some of the shoes are fashionable, umm it not suitable for me because I need to consider the fact the comfort.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repeated words. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. "a shoes" → "shoes" or "a pair of shoes"). Try to keep to 2–4 sentences and remove filler sounds like "uh".
Example: Yes, I used to enjoy buying shoes because it made me feel excited and relieved. However, I rarely buy them now because I already own many pairs, so new purchases feel unnecessary.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Answer directly and correct tense and vocabulary (e.g. "I bought basketball shoes online" or "I have bought shoes online"). Use linking words to organize reasons (e.g. "because", "also") and give one concrete detail about which shoes or a specific app/site. Avoid repetition and ungrammatical phrases like "it would don't have".
Example: Yes, I bought basketball shoes online through the brand’s official app because it was convenient and cheaper. Also, that model was sold exclusively online, so I couldn’t find it in any physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Give a clear numeric answer first, then explain why. Fix sentence structure (e.g. "I usually spend about CN¥700 on a pair of shoes"). Remove repeated words and vague phrases like "big shoes" and "call such money". Provide a brief reason—value, quality, budget—to support the figure.
Example: I usually spend about CN¥700 on a pair of shoes. I think this is a reasonable price for good quality, and since I don’t buy shoes often, I prefer to buy one well-made pair rather than many cheap ones.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: State your preference clearly in one sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Avoid repeating the same word and use correct forms ("comfort" or "comfortable"). Provide an example or short comparison to make your answer more specific.
Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot and need good support. Although fashionable shoes can look nice, they are often less practical for daily use, so I choose comfort over style.
Grammar
× But now I seldom buy a shoes because I have too many shoes, so it is unnecessary for me to buy shoes.
✓ But now I seldom buy shoes because I have too many, so it is unnecessary for me to buy more.
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