Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes and how often, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct basic grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I like shoes, but I don't enjoy shopping for them very often. I find it difficult to choose styles that suit me, so I usually only buy new pairs a few times a year when I find something that fits well.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and give one or two specific details (when, what type, why it was good). Use past tense consistently and avoid filler sounds. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to make the response coherent.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online. For example, about two years ago I ordered a pair of casual sneakers that turned out to be comfortable and true to size, so I had a positive experience.

Suggestion: Give a clear amount and explain briefly how often you spend that or why you might spend more in the future. Use correct expressions for money and future plans, and reduce hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Example: I usually spend about $100 on a pair of shoes. In the future I expect to spend more because I plan to buy higher-quality or branded shoes for work.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference or say you like both, then give specific situations when you choose each. Use linking words such as 'when' and 'because' and finish the sentence. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday wear because I walk a lot, but when I attend formal events I choose fashionable, classic shoes to look more professional.

× To be honest, I love shoes, but I didn't like buying shoes 'cause it's really hard for me to choose and find my favorite one which will be matching to me.

✓ To be honest, I love shoes, but I don't like buying them because it's really hard for me to choose and find my favorite pair that will suit me.

Pronoun and noun choice errors: 'didn't like' conflicts with present habit — use present tense 'don't like'. 'Buying shoes' repeated is awkward; use pronoun 'them' or 'pair'. 'Favorite one' unnatural for shoes; use 'favorite pair'. 'Will be matching to me' is incorrect — use 'that will suit me' or 'that match me'. Suggestions: use consistent present tense for habits, replace redundant nouns with pronouns, and use 'suit' or 'match' with correct noun form.

× So I'm always trying to do it's really, but I'm trying.

✓ So I always try, but it's difficult.

Unclear and redundant structure: 'trying to do it's really' is ungrammatical. Use a clear subject-verb structure 'I always try' and express difficulty with 'it's difficult' or 'it's hard'. Suggest rewriting short, simple sentences to convey meaning.

× Uh yes, I have mods shows online and I have good experience within it.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online and I had a good experience with them.

Word choice and pronoun errors: 'mods shows' is likely 'bought shoes' or 'ordered shoes'; 'have good experience within it' is incorrect—use 'had a good experience with them'. Ensure correct verb for past completed action 'bought' and match pronoun 'them' to plural 'shoes'.

× Umm, as I remember it was two years ago and it was umm big shoes.

✓ If I remember correctly, it was two years ago and they were a big size.

Tense and agreement: 'as I remember' better as 'if I remember correctly'. 'It was two years ago' is acceptable but 'it' can be 'that' or 'it'; more natural: 'it was two years ago'. 'It was big shoes' is ungrammatical—use plural pronoun 'they were' and specify 'a large size' or 'big shoes'. Suggestions: match plural subject with plural verb and use natural time expressions.

× It was comfortable and matching size.

✓ They were comfortable and the size was right.

Pronoun and adjective issues: 'It' should be 'They' referring to shoes (plural). 'Matching size' is unnatural—use 'the size was right' or 'they matched my size'. Ensure pronoun number agreement and use idiomatic expressions.

× Uh, usually I'm spending about 100, uh, dollar, uh, on my shoes and uh, is it planning, uh, in my future I will spend more 'cause I have plan my future and.

✓ Usually I spend about 100 dollars on shoes, and I plan to spend more in the future because I have plans for that.

Tense and article/number errors: Use simple present 'I spend' for habitual action, not present continuous 'I'm spending'. '100 dollar' needs plural 'dollars'. Phrase 'is it planning' is ungrammatical—use 'I plan to' or 'I intend to'. 'I have plan my future' is incorrect; use 'I have plans for the future' or 'I plan for the future'. Suggestions: use simple present for habits, correct plural forms, and use 'plan to' + verb for intentions.

× MMM in my personality lives to absolutely different person.

✓ I have different sides to my personality.

Awkward idiom and word order: 'in my personality lives to absolutely different person' is ungrammatical. Use natural phrasing like 'I have different sides to my personality' or 'I can be an entirely different person at times'. Suggestions: use common expressions to describe personality and correct word order.

× Uh, sometimes I prefer comfortable shows and clothes, sometimes I prefer umm official and umm classical look, so I'm always trying to match with my.

✓ Sometimes I prefer comfortable shoes and clothes; sometimes I prefer a formal, classic look, so I always try to match my outfits.

Multiple errors: 'shows' should be 'shoes'. 'Official and classical look' is better as 'formal, classic look'. 'Match with my' is incomplete—need object like 'my outfits' or 'my clothes'. Use parallel structure and correct vocabulary. Suggestions: use correct nouns, maintain parallelism in 'sometimes... sometimes...' sentences, and complete the final phrase with the object being matched.