Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
Yes I do. I usually buy new shoes about once every six months on shop online.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
Yes, definitely. I often buy shoes online because they are cheaper than in physical stores and there is a wide range of styles to choose from. And it also offers.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
I think it depends on. Or I need the shoes for if they are very comfortable and I will wear them long. I don't mind paying more, but for shoes I only wear occasionally I prefer something cheaper.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
I fond of buying a comfortable shoes because I like running so I think the comfortable shoes more comfort me.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答需更自然且语法正确。避免语法错误和多余表达，使用一个主题句并补充简短理由和频率说明。注意介词用法（‘online’前不需‘on’）和数词短语的位置。
Example: Yes, I do. I usually buy new shoes about once every six months because I wear them out quickly. I prefer shopping online since it’s more convenient and offers more choices.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答要完整且避免句子不完整的结尾。先用一句话直接回答，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。不要留下未完成的短语（如“And it also offers.”）。
Example: Yes, I have. I often buy shoes online because they tend to be cheaper than in physical stores and there’s a wider range of styles. For example, I can easily compare prices and read reviews before I buy.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答要更有条理并使用连接词组织条件句。直接给出大致价格区间或原则，然后说明影响价格的因素。避免碎片化句子如“depends on.”后的不完整内容。
Example: It depends on the purpose: for everyday sneakers I usually spend around $80–$120 because I need them to be comfortable and durable. But for occasional shoes I’ll spend less, maybe $30–$50.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: 回答需语法正确并更自然表达偏好。先给出明确偏好句，然后用具体原因和连接词支持，注意主谓一致和形容词/名词形式（e.g. 'fond of'后接名词或动名词）。
Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I run regularly and need good support. Comfortable shoes help prevent injuries and let me run longer without pain.
Grammar
× I usually buy new shoes about once every six months on shop online.
✓ I usually buy new shoes about once every six months online.
句中介词短语“on shop online”用法不正确。应使用副词“online”表示“在网上”，并且动词短语顺序错误，正确说法是“buy ... online”。建议将“on shop online”删去或替换为“online”。
× I often buy shoes online because they are cheaper than in physical stores and there is a wide range of styles to choose from. And it also offers.
✓ I often buy shoes online because they are cheaper than in physical stores and there is a wide range of styles to choose from.
原句末尾“And it also offers.”是不完整句（缺主语或宾语），造成句子结构错误。已将多余的碎片句删除。建议避免使用无明确指代的短句，若要保留可改为完整句如“and it also offers many options.”（并且它也提供很多选择）。（中文：原句末尾的短句不完整，缺少主语或宾语，应删去或改为完整句。）
× I think it depends on. Or I need the shoes for if they are very comfortable and I will wear them long.
✓ I think it depends. If I need the shoes to be very comfortable and will wear them for a long time, I don't mind paying more.
原句语序混乱并包含不完整或多余的片段（“depends on”、“Or I need the shoes for if”均不完整）。已重构句子以表达完整意思：先说明“这取决于”，然后说明条件和结果。建议使用“depends”后跟完整的宾语或直接独立句，并用“if”引导条件从句，时间状语用“for a long time”。（中文：原句片段化，语序和从句连接错误，应重写为完整的条件句。）
× I fond of buying a comfortable shoes because I like running so I think the comfortable shoes more comfort me.
✓ I'm fond of buying comfortable shoes because I like running, so I think comfortable shoes are more comfortable for me.
句中存在多处错误：1) 缺少be动词，应为“I'm fond of”；2) 名词单复数错误，“a comfortable shoes”中冠词与复数冲突，应为“comfortable shoes”或“a comfortable shoe”；3) 比较结构不正确，“the comfortable shoes more comfort me”语法错误，应为“are more comfortable for me”。建议注意主系表结构、冠词与名词数一致，以及使用正确的形容词比较形式。（中文：缺少系动词、冠词与复数不一致、比较表达错误，应改为“I'm fond of buying comfortable shoes... are more comfortable for me”。）
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