Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer responds to the question but is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Improve clarity by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences) and avoid redundancy (e.g., don’t repeat the same idea twice).

Example: I don’t buy shoes very often. I usually purchase a new pair only for special occasions, such as weddings or birthdays, so I buy shoes about twice a year. Because I’m not particularly interested in fashion, I prefer practical, long-lasting styles.

Suggestion: The answer gives a clear opinion but is disorganized, repetitive, and has many grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Avoid repeating phrases like “fake”.

Example: No, I rarely buy shoes online because I don’t trust product reviews; sometimes they are misleading. In addition, sizes can be inconsistent, so I prefer trying shoes on in physical stores before buying.

Suggestion: Your answer is not relevant to the question — the examiner asked about spending, not online shopping. Make sure you answer directly with a topic sentence stating a typical amount or range, then add a brief reason or example. Use numbers or currency to be specific.

Example: I usually spend around $40–$80 on a pair of shoes. For special occasions I might spend up to $120, but for everyday shoes I stick to a moderate budget because I value comfort over brand names.

Suggestion: The response is off-topic and repeats a previous point. Directly state your preference in the first sentence, then provide a brief reason and an example using linking words (e.g., because, for instance). Keep it concise and avoid repeating unrelated complaints about online shopping.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I wear them for long periods during the day. For instance, I choose cushioned sneakers for work and walking instead of high heels, since comfort matters more to me than trends.

× Usually I buy the shoes only when there is need on special occasions or on birthday parties because I am not very fond of shoes. So I buy the shoes twice in a year only.

✓ Usually I buy shoes only when there is a need, on special occasions or at birthday parties, because I am not very fond of shoes. So I buy shoes only twice a year.

Incorrect or unnecessary use of the definite article 'the' before general plural noun 'shoes' and missing article 'a' before 'need'. Use 'shoes' (no article) when speaking in general. Use 'a need' to indicate singular countable noun. Also change 'in a year' to 'a year' and move 'only' for natural English word order.

× Well in my opinion I don't trust on online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from the fake peoples I love to do shopping by from markets and also sometimes there are not proper size comings.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I don't trust online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from fake people. I prefer to shop in markets, and sometimes the sizes are not correct.

Incorrect preposition 'trust on' should be 'trust' or 'trust in' (commonly 'trust' with object). 'From the fake peoples' is wrong: use 'from fake people' (no article, 'people' not 'peoples'). 'Do shopping by from markets' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer to shop in markets'. 'There are not proper size comings' is incorrect; say 'the sizes are not correct' or 'proper'. The corrections fix prepositions and restructure for clarity.

× Well in my opinion I don't trust on online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from the fake peoples I love to do shopping by from markets and also sometimes there are not proper size comings.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I don't trust online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from fake people. I prefer to shop in markets, and sometimes the sizes are not correct.

The original is a run-on sentence with multiple ideas incorrectly joined and no punctuation. It needs splitting into two or three sentences and reordering for clarity: state distrust, give reason, state preference, and mention sizing problems. This correction fixes sentence boundaries and word order.

× Well in my opinion I don't trust on online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from the fake peoples I love to do shopping by from markets and also sometimes there are not proper size comings.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I don't trust online shopping because sometimes there are fake reviews from fake people. I prefer to shop in markets, and sometimes the sizes are not correct.

'Peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural noun for persons. Also 'size comings' is not a valid plural phrase; use 'sizes' or 'size information'.

× So I buy the shoes twice in a year only.

✓ So I buy shoes only twice a year.

The present simple is acceptable for habitual action but word order is awkward. Remove 'the' and place 'only' before 'twice' or before the whole phrase: 'only twice a year'. This produces natural present-tense habitual statement.