Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then provide specific examples using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical errors.

Example: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school to ensure safety. For example, students must wear their ID badges at all times and follow the school's dress code.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on expressing your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help maintain order and ensure everyone's safety. For instance, clear rules about behavior can prevent conflicts among students.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details about the teacher's qualities or teaching methods. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well, especially my math teacher. He explains mathematical concepts clearly and always encourages us to ask questions, which helps me understand the subject better.

× In my circle, the pupils has many rules for security.

✓ In my circle, the pupils have many rules for security.

The subject 'pupils' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× For example, students must follow rules for, however.

✓ For example, students must follow rules for security, however.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. Adding 'security' after 'for' completes the thought, and placing 'however' properly improves clarity.

× In my opinion, students would benefit more from more reputations because rules have provide security.

✓ In my opinion, students would benefit more from more rules because rules provide security.

The word 'reputations' is incorrect here; it should be 'rules'. Also, 'have provide' is incorrect verb form; it should be 'provide'.

× So if the rules hasn't students make.

✓ So if the rules aren't followed, students may make mistakes.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Rules' is plural, so 'hasn't' is incorrect. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I have a teacher doing her job very well, especially my math teacher.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well, especially my math teacher.

The phrase 'doing her job' should be replaced with 'who does her job' to correctly describe the teacher's action.

× He is teach us the mathematics rules and also he.

✓ He teaches us the mathematics rules, and he also helps us.

The verb 'teach' needs to be in the third person singular form 'teaches'. The sentence is also incomplete and is corrected for clarity.