Rules— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Sure, there should be some rules in the university or school and you know, the principal have to rule out these, you know, mandatory schemes for the children to teach them how to discipline.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
Yes, I believe rules in this school would impact on children, you know, self-discipline and behavior and I believe family would be appreciate that. And you know for better life students need rules.
Examiner
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidate
Frankly speaking, my teachers had so many, you know, rules and they were well disciplined and they made my life easier in context, you know, I believe they were really good.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, use correct grammar and be more specific about the rules.
Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must attend classes on time and respect their teachers. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but lacks coherence and contains filler phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how rules benefit students.
Example: Yes, I think having more rules can help students develop self-discipline and improve their behavior. Moreover, families would appreciate this because it prepares students for a better life in the future.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Your answer is vague and contains many filler words. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples of how the teacher did their job well.
Example: Yes, I had a teacher who was very organized and strict with rules. Because of her discipline, I was able to focus better and improve my grades significantly.
Grammar
× Sure, there should be some rules in the university or school and you know, the principal have to rule out these, you know, mandatory schemes for the children to teach them how to discipline.
✓ Sure, there should be some rules in the university or school and you know, the principal has to rule out these, you know, mandatory schemes for the children to teach them how to discipline.
The subject 'principal' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
× Yes, I believe rules in this school would impact on children, you know, self-discipline and behavior and I believe family would be appreciate that.
✓ Yes, I believe rules in this school would impact children, you know, self-discipline and behavior and I believe families would appreciate that.
The pronoun 'family' should be plural 'families' to match the context, and 'would be appreciate' is incorrect; it should be 'would appreciate'. This corrects pronoun usage and verb form.
× Yes, I believe rules in this school would impact on children, you know, self-discipline and behavior and I believe family would be appreciate that.
✓ Yes, I believe rules in this school would impact children, you know, self-discipline and behavior and I believe families would appreciate that.
The verb 'impact' is typically used without the preposition 'on' in this context. Removing 'on' corrects the preposition usage.
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