Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shongothito korte paren. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor kichu specific udaharan dite hobe. Apnar uttor e sentence gulo incomplete o redundant mone hocche. Apni chesta korun 3-4 sentence e spostho o shongothito uttor dite.

Example: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we have a dress code that requires us to wear uniforms. Also, students must be punctual and respect teachers. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, ar sentence gulo spostho noy. Apni prothome proshner uttor dite paren, tarpor karon o udaharan dite paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korte paren. Vocabulary aro bhalo korte hobe.

Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Because following rules at school teaches discipline and responsibility, which are important in adult life. For instance, learning to be punctual and respectful can help students succeed in their future careers.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor onek confused o incomplete. Apni prothome spostho vabe teacher er kotha bolun, tarpor kichu specific details din. Linking words babohar korun. Sentence gulo shothik grammar e likhun.

Example: Yes, I had a physics teacher in college who was excellent at teaching. She explained difficult concepts clearly and was very patient. I still follow her on social media because she shares useful educational content.

× Yes, there are so many rules in my school for students. About how to dress and.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in my school for students about how to dress and behave.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'About how to dress and.' This is a sentence structure error because the sentence lacks a complete thought. To correct it, the sentence should be completed by adding what the rules are about, such as 'behave.' This makes the sentence complete and clear.

× Yes, I think the student will get benefit in their future life.

✓ Yes, I think the students will benefit in their future life.

The original sentence uses 'the student' (singular) but then uses 'their' (plural possessive pronoun), which is inconsistent. Also, 'get benefit' is not idiomatic; 'benefit' is better used as a verb here. The correction changes 'the student' to 'the students' to match 'their' and uses 'will benefit' instead of 'will get benefit' for natural English.

× In future life if they avoid the rules of schools, it will help them to sharp their characteristic and their discipline life.

✓ In future life, if they follow the rules of schools, it will help them to sharpen their character and live a disciplined life.

The original sentence has several errors: 'avoid the rules' is likely incorrect as following rules is beneficial; 'sharp' should be 'sharpen' (verb form); 'characteristic' should be 'character'; 'discipline life' should be 'disciplined life.' Also, 'help them to sharp' is incorrect; it should be 'help them to sharpen.' The preposition 'of' in 'rules of schools' is acceptable but 'rules at school' or 'school rules' is more natural. The correction addresses these issues for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I have a teacher who's who is, who is my chemistry, who is my physics teacher, who was my physics teacher in my college life.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who is my physics teacher; she was my physics teacher in my college life.

The original sentence is confusing and repetitive with 'who's who is, who is my chemistry, who is my physics teacher.' It also mixes subjects and tenses. The correction simplifies the sentence, clarifies the subject, and uses the correct pronoun 'she' for the teacher. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I still follow her in social media, him in social media and he is still.

✓ And I still follow her on social media, and she is still active.

The original sentence incorrectly switches pronouns from 'her' to 'him' and then 'he' when referring to the same teacher, causing confusion. Also, the phrase 'in social media' should be 'on social media.' The correction uses consistent pronouns 'her' and 'she' and corrects the preposition to 'on.' It also completes the sentence for clarity.