Rules— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Of course, there are many rules that students at my school have to obey. First, students need to wear school uniform properly. For example, on Tuesday we can wear an EP uniform but on Monday we have to wear a white shirt with trousers. Also, there are no phones allowed in my school.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
Of course, students would benefit more because those rules help maintain discipline and create a positive learning environment. For example, when they don't use phones, they can minimize distractions and focus better on their studies.
Examiner
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidate
Yes, my English teacher did his job very well because he not only care about our personal problems but also give advice on them. Moreover, his expertise is incredible as he brought in my horizon through knowledge.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: Your answer is clear and provides specific examples, which is good. However, to improve, try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like 'no phones allowed' which should be 'phones are not allowed'.
Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear the correct uniform; on Mondays, we wear a white shirt with trousers, while on Tuesdays, we wear the EP uniform. Additionally, phones are not allowed to minimize distractions.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Score: 90.0Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and well-structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence, such as 'Furthermore' or 'In addition'.
Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules. Furthermore, these rules help maintain discipline and foster a positive learning environment. For example, by prohibiting phone use, students can reduce distractions and concentrate better on their studies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific examples of the teacher's qualities.
Example: Yes, my English teacher does his job very well because he not only cares about our personal problems but also gives us valuable advice. Moreover, his expertise is impressive, as he has broadened my horizons by sharing extensive knowledge.
Grammar
× Yes, my English teacher did his job very well because he not only care about our personal problems but also give advice on them.
✓ Yes, my English teacher did his job very well because he not only cares about our personal problems but also gives advice on them.
The verbs 'care' and 'give' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. In the present tense, third person singular verbs require an 's' at the end, so 'care' becomes 'cares' and 'give' becomes 'gives'. This ensures subject-verb agreement.
× Moreover, his expertise is incredible as he brought in my horizon through knowledge.
✓ Moreover, his expertise is incredible as he broadened my horizon through knowledge.
The phrase 'brought in my horizon' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'broadened my horizon', meaning to expand one's knowledge or experience. Also, 'broadened' is the correct past tense form of 'broaden'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.
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