Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. To improve, focus on giving a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples of rules.

Example: Yes, my school has several important rules. For example, students must wear their uniforms properly and maintain discipline in every class. Additionally, they should avoid making noise to ensure a good learning environment. These rules help create a respectful and focused atmosphere for everyone.

Suggestion: Your answer shows understanding but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain your points logically. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students in many ways. For instance, having clear rules helps students develop discipline both at school and at home. Moreover, this discipline prepares them for future responsibilities, such as applying for jobs and working in professional environments.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references. To improve, use correct pronouns, avoid run-on sentences, and organize your answer with linking words. Also, give specific examples of how the teacher supports students.

Example: Yes, my school principal, Narendra Singh, is an excellent educator. He has worked as a government servant for about 25 years and is always punctual. Furthermore, he encourages students to excel in both academics and extracurricular activities, which motivates us to do our best.

× Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like to wear uniform properly and and making discipline in every class and student must be apologize and study in the constant way, do not make noise and these are the complimentary basic rule in my school.

✓ Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like wearing the uniform properly, maintaining discipline in every class, students must apologize, study consistently, and not make noise. These are the basic complimentary rules in my school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and and' and mixes infinitive and gerund forms improperly. Also, the sentence is a run-on with multiple 'and's without proper punctuation. Correcting conjunction usage and parallel structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like to wear uniform properly and and making discipline in every class and student must be apologize and study in the constant way, do not make noise and these are the complimentary basic rule in my school.

✓ Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like wearing the uniform properly, maintaining discipline in every class, students must apologize, study consistently, and not make noise. These are the basic complimentary rules in my school.

The phrase 'complimentary basic rule' is incorrect; it should be 'basic complimentary rules' to correctly use adjectives and plural form. Also, 'study in the constant way' is awkward; 'study consistently' is more appropriate.

× Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like to wear uniform properly and and making discipline in every class and student must be apologize and study in the constant way, do not make noise and these are the complimentary basic rule in my school.

✓ Yes, there are some basic rules in my school like wearing the uniform properly, maintaining discipline in every class, students must apologize, study consistently, and not make noise. These are the basic complimentary rules in my school.

The phrase 'these are the complimentary basic rule' uses 'rule' in singular form while referring to multiple rules. It should be plural 'rules' to agree with 'these are'.

× student must be apologize and study in the constant way

✓ students must apologize and study consistently

The modal verb 'must' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. 'Must be apologize' is incorrect; it should be 'must apologize'.

× By making more rules by the school benefits the student in various ways.

✓ Making more rules by the school benefits the students in various ways.

The phrase 'By making more rules by the school benefits the student' is awkward and incorrect. Removing 'By' at the start and correcting 'student' to plural 'students' improves subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× By making more rules by the school benefits the student in various ways.

✓ Making more rules by the school benefits the students in various ways.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because the sentence refers to multiple students benefiting.

× Like the student is able to live in discipline in home and school both sides and after that they are able to live in a foundation criteria when they are apply for a job.

✓ For example, students are able to live disciplined lives both at home and school, and after that, they are able to live on a foundational basis when they apply for a job.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'discipline' and 'home'. Also, 'live in a foundation criteria' is incorrect; 'live on a foundational basis' or similar is better. 'Apply' should be 'apply' without 'are'.

× Like the student is able to live in discipline in home and school both sides and after that they are able to live in a foundation criteria when they are apply for a job.

✓ For example, students are able to live disciplined lives both at home and school, and after that, they are able to live on a foundational basis when they apply for a job.

The phrase 'when they are apply' is incorrect; 'apply' should be in base form after 'when they' (simple present). Also, 'making discipline' should be 'maintaining discipline' to use the correct present participle form.

× Yes, my school principal named Narendra Singh, he was a government servant and he was doing her duty for about 25 years and he's punctual at their time and always encourage the children to do their best for academics and non academic performance.

✓ Yes, my school principal named Narendra Singh was a government servant and he did his duty for about 25 years. He is punctual with his time and always encourages the children to do their best in academics and non-academic performance.

The phrase 'he was doing her duty' mixes pronouns and tense incorrectly; it should be 'he did his duty' in past tense. Also, 'he's punctual at their time' is incorrect; it should be 'he is punctual with his time'. 'Always encourage' should be 'always encourages' to agree with third person singular subject.

× he was doing her duty for about 25 years

✓ he did his duty for about 25 years

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect when referring to 'he'; it should be 'his' to match the subject's gender.

× and always encourage the children to do their best for academics and non academic performance.

✓ and always encourages the children to do their best in academics and non-academic performance.

The verb 'encourage' should be in third person singular form 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'he'.