Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid run-ons. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of rules. Also, keep your answer concise and natural within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, there are several strict rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms properly and are not allowed to wear makeup. Additionally, punctuality is important, so students must attend classes on time. These rules help maintain discipline and focus in school.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. Provide specific reasons why more rules could benefit students.

Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules, such as banning makeup and mobile phones. For instance, phones ringing or notifications often distract students during lessons, which affects their concentration. Therefore, stricter rules could create a better learning environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details about how the teacher helps students. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise.

Example: Yes, I have a female teacher named Hassa who does her job very well. She is strict about following school rules, which helps minimize distractions in class. Moreover, she supports students by providing extra help when they struggle, making her a positive influence.

× Yes, there are several strict rules for students at my school, such as wearing uniforms perfectly avoiding makeup. Students must attend classes without being late and.

✓ Yes, there are several strict rules for students at my school, such as wearing uniforms properly and avoiding makeup. Students must attend classes without being late.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, causing confusion. 'Wearing uniforms perfectly avoiding makeup' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing uniforms properly and avoiding makeup' to clearly list the rules. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Correct sentence structure requires clear separation of ideas and proper use of conjunctions.

× I think that many students would love these rules such as avoid makeup and avoid phones.

✓ I think that many students would love these rules, such as avoiding makeup and avoiding phones.

After expressions like 'such as', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate examples of actions. 'Avoid makeup' and 'avoid phones' are incorrect here; they should be 'avoiding makeup' and 'avoiding phones' to maintain grammatical consistency.

× Many students suffer from phones ringing or phones notifications also distracts them and.

✓ Many students suffer from phones ringing, and phone notifications also distract them.

'Phones notifications' is incorrect; it should be 'phone notifications' (singular noun 'phone' used as adjective). Also, 'distracts' should be 'distract' to agree with the plural subject 'notifications'. The sentence also ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed or completed.