Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains redundancy and unclear phrases like "tourism court cultism." Try to be more precise and avoid repeating ideas. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, there are rules at my school. These rules were introduced to reduce cultism among students. As a result, the school environment has become safer, allowing students to focus better on their studies.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like "because" and "therefore" properly, and avoid repeating words. Also, be more specific about how the rules help students academically.

Example: Yes, students would benefit from more rules because cultism exposes them to danger. Therefore, having clear guidelines helps protect students and improves their academic progress.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use simpler phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward expressions like "channel their understanding towards their achieving."

Example: Yes, I have teachers who do their job well. For example, they prepare clear course outlines that help students understand the subjects better, which leads to successful academic results.

× Yes, the student would definitely benefit from the rules because the issue of cultism has exposed the students to dangers and and it hinders their their progress in their academics.

✓ Yes, the students would definitely benefit from the rules because the issue of cultism has exposed the students to dangers and it hinders their progress in their academics.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the context referring to multiple students. Also, repeated words 'and and' and 'their their' are errors and should be corrected to single instances. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So there's a guideline is going to help the students a lot.

✓ So this guideline is going to help the students a lot.

The original sentence has redundant elements 'there's a guideline is' which is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'this guideline is' to form a correct and clear sentence structure.