Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'at their school' nên là 'at my school'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must remain quiet during lessons to help everyone concentrate and learn effectively.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'unuseful' (nên dùng 'useless' hoặc 'not useful') và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính thức như 'you know'.

Example: I don't think more rules would help because some rules are not useful, especially for active children. Rules are only effective when students understand the reasons behind them.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'help student' nên là 'help students' và 'although she have to explore the lesson' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'cute' khi nói về giáo viên.

Example: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher in high school. She was always willing to help students understand the lessons and made extra efforts to explain difficult topics.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh dùng từ không chính thức như 'you know'.

Example: I prefer fewer rules at school because strict rules can limit children's ability to express themselves. Reducing rules would create a more open environment for students.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số nhiều/số ít, ví dụ 'used to had' nên là 'used to have', 'who are' nên là 'who was', và 'he's help us' nên là 'he helped us'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I used to have a strict math teacher who was well-known for his strict personality. However, he was kind and always willing to help us.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác, ví dụ 'I would don't like' nên là 'I wouldn't like', 'difficult jobs' nên là 'a difficult job'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng.

Example: I wouldn't like to be a teacher because I don't think I am suitable for the job. Teaching is very challenging. However, if I worked in a school without rules, I would consider it carefully.

× Yes, there are so many rules that you'll need to follow at their school.

✓ Yes, there are so many rules that you'll need to follow at your school.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to the listener's school, so 'your' should be used instead to indicate possession.

× I don't think so, because some rules are so unuseful for them, especially children who are in the age of active and, you know, formative.

✓ I don't think so, because some rules are not very useful for them, especially children who are at an active and, you know, formative age.

The word 'unuseful' is not commonly used; 'not very useful' is more appropriate. Also, 'in the age of active and formative' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'at an active and formative age'.

× So that moral would not definitely effectively when children don't know why they have to follow them.

✓ So that moral would definitely not be effective when children don't know why they have to follow them.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Definitely' should come before 'not be effective' to properly negate the effectiveness. Also, 'moral' should be treated as 'morale' or 'discipline' but here it's kept as 'moral' assuming the intended meaning.

× She always is willing to help student to understand the lesson although she have to explore the lesson.

✓ She is always willing to help students understand the lesson although she has to prepare the lesson.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Explore the lesson' is awkward; 'prepare the lesson' is more appropriate.

× I would love to have fewer rules at school because children cannot only follow strictly to the rule.

✓ I would love to have fewer rules at school because children cannot only follow the rules strictly.

The phrase 'follow strictly to the rule' is incorrect. The correct form is 'follow the rules strictly' without the preposition 'to'.

× Some, you know, some hard rule which was pay for them to express themselves so that school would reduce the rules.

✓ Some, you know, some strict rules prevent them from expressing themselves, so the school should reduce the rules.

The phrase 'hard rule which was pay for them' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'strict rules prevent them from expressing themselves'. Also, 'would reduce' is changed to 'should reduce' for clarity.

× Yes, of course, if my memory serves me right, I usually I used to had a math teacher who are famous with the strictly personality, but he's so kind because he's help us.

✓ Yes, of course, if my memory serves me right, I used to have a math teacher who was famous for his strict personality, but he was very kind because he helped us.

'Used to had' is incorrect; it should be 'used to have'. 'Who are famous' should be 'who was famous' to agree with singular 'teacher'. 'Strictly personality' should be 'strict personality'. 'He's help us' should be 'he helped us' to maintain past tense.

× First of all, I would don't like to be a teacher because I don't find myself appropriate with being a teacher.

✓ First of all, I wouldn't like to be a teacher because I don't find myself suitable for being a teacher.

'I would don't like' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I wouldn't like'. Also, 'appropriate with' should be 'suitable for'.

× It is very difficult jobs, so I don't.

✓ It is a very difficult job, so I don't.

'Jobs' should be singular 'job' because it refers to the profession in general. Also, 'a' is needed before 'very difficult job'.

× I haven't thought about that before, but if I work in a free rule school, I would take consideration.

✓ I haven't thought about that before, but if I worked in a rule-free school, I would take it into consideration.

'Free rule school' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rule-free school'. Also, 'take consideration' should be 'take it into consideration'. The conditional tense 'if I worked' fits better here.