Rules— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Yes, there are some rules In my school. For example, we must wear uniforms during the weekdays and mobile phones are not allowed during the classes because they will disturb us.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
Yes, students would definitely benefit from more rules. They can help students keep organized and discipline. It can create a strict environment for learning.
Examiner
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Candidate
Yes, my Senior High School history teacher was really dedicated. She often stay up to the TO after school and help us with our problems.
Examiner
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Candidate
Well, I prefer to have fewer rules in our school. The basic rules are necessary, but if they are too much, it will be not good for students creativity and learning habits.
Examiner
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Candidate
Well, actually I don't have a really strict teacher. My teachers are easy going and I would like to talk with them. There are some strict teacher from my friends but I don't have had one.
Examiner
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Candidate
No, I wouldn't like to work in a roofing school because without rules there will there would be lack of discipline and order. Students may find it difficult to be focused and learning.
Evaluation
Overall
Grammar
× She often stay up to the TO after school and help us with our problems.
✓ She often stays up late after school and helps us with our problems.
动词第三人称单数时，动词需要加-s或-es。这里的主语是第三人称单数She，动词stay应改为stays，help应改为helps。此外，短语“stay up to the TO”不正确，应为“stay up late”。
× They can help students keep organized and discipline.
✓ They can help students keep organized and disciplined.
这里discipline用作形容词时应为disciplined，表示有纪律的状态。原句中discipline是名词，语法不正确。
× There are some strict teacher from my friends but I don't have had one.
✓ There are some strict teachers from my friends but I haven't had one.
teacher应为复数teachers，因为前面有some表示复数。动词时态也应改为现在完成时haven't had。
× No, I wouldn't like to work in a roofing school because without rules there will there would be lack of discipline and order.
✓ No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because without rules there would be a lack of discipline and order.
这里使用了will和would的重复，应只用would。roofing school应为rule-free school，表示无规则的学校。缺少冠词a，a lack of discipline。
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